underneathean Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 This is my first group of cards. I plan to continue this set well into the future. This first part contains a few OCG errors that I am aware of, but I am unable to change them without completely recreating them as I neglected to save them. Please feel free to comment and rate. (note that this set would work best with Red-Eyes Zombie Dragon included) [align=center]lore: "Zombie Hero Vamprus" + "Zombie Hero Lady Vamprus"Every-time this card destroys a monster in battle, Special Summon 1 "Bat Token" (Zombie-type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Defense Position on your side of the field. During your Main Phase you can sacrifice any number of "Bat Tokens" on your side of the field to Special Summon 1 monster from your opponents graveyard with the same number of "Bat Counters" as the number of "Bat Tokens" you sacrificed. At the beginning of your turn take away 1 "Bat Counter" from each monster summoned by this cards effect. If a monster summoned by this cards effect does not have any "Bat Counters" on it, destroy it. Lore: When this card battles one of your opponents monsters, you can treat this card as an equip card and equip it to your opponents monster (Battle Damage is calculated normally). Take control of the monster this card is equipped to. When the equipped card would be destroyed, destroy this card instead. At the end of your turn, unequip this card and summon it on your side of the field. When this card is no longer equipped to your opponents monster, it gains a "Vamprus Counter" and your opponent gains control of it. A monster with a "Vamprus Counter" on it is treated as a Zombie-type monster and loses 300 attack and defense points for each "Vamprus Counter" on the card. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 I like the theme, some pics could be better few OCG errors rate 8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 a little OCG errorsnice pics9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucarios Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 I must admit it is really beautiful beautiful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Some capitilazation errors, and the pics could be of better quality and some effects seem very basic indeed. Though they seem alright seeing as your new, 7.6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Crop some of the images, they have white borders. level = LevelZombie-type = Zombie-Typeone = 1When this card battles one of your opponents monsters = When this card battles 1 of your opponent's monstersattack points = ATK This card is not affected by Trap, Spell, or Monster effects = This card is unaffected by the effects of Monster, Spell, and Trap Cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Some OCG errorz, overused pics and nice archtype! 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
underneathean Posted February 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Thanks for the comments guys!But could somebody review my cards balance? Nobody's commented on that yet and I'm curious what you guys think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PremierAameer Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Some OCG errors(Ex. Take Away -> Remove)but Awesome work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
underneathean Posted February 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 Thanks Premier! New cards: Toon Earthen Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned while "Toon World" is on your side of the field. You can Special Summon this monster from your hand, but Tributes are required for monster Level 5 or more. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target. When this card is selected as an attack target, flip a coin. If its heads, negate the attack. Toon Deathcloak Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned while "Toon World" is on your side of the field. You can Special Summon this monster from your hand, but Tributes are required for monster Level 5 or more. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target. While this card is face-up on the field, all cards that would go to your opponents Graveyard go to your Graveyard instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
underneathean Posted March 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YuugiCM Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Red eyes zombie metal ultimate baby rare super deluxe white fudge brownie dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 awesome idea, and pretty cool pics even thoguh they need renders and backgrounds. (well some of them)8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
underneathean Posted March 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2009 Thanks, I assume your talking about the white borders on some of them, that was because of a problem with the pic format I used in some of the earlier cards. I've fixed it now though so there shouldn't be any problem with them in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JAD Le Rusecue Posted March 7, 2009 Report Share Posted March 7, 2009 I rate your cards a 9.5/10God, I wish I was this good.Anyway, it's been awhile since I played YUGIOH and I was just wondering, what are the white monsters, and what is a Tuner monster? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noroldir Posted March 7, 2009 Report Share Posted March 7, 2009 to answer you question white monsters are sychro monsters and tuners are neded to summon sychro monsters. and for the cards love em all exept for devro the pic its kinda weird if you could find better pic i rate 10/10 awsome idea. favorite one is red eyes revived dragon coolest one on my opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
underneathean Posted March 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 thanks noroldir, and pic-wise red-eyes revived is probably my favorite too. I found it, I think, while looking for zombie metal, so I made myself make that card especially for that pic. because I liked it so much. thanks to JAD too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ratcoon Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 :D nice i would show you mine but i need to kknow how todo that :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Good archtype a lot of overused pics. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 overused pics 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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