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Correction:

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Realeasing 2 FIRE monsters you control. During the turn this card was Normal Summoned' date=' increase the ATK and DEF[/b'] of this card increases by 1000 untill your End Phase.''

 

[align=center]I fixed the fixed OCG by JVR.

 

The effect is too short, maybe try adding more to the effect or giving it something more, whether its Graveyard related or whatever, just a little more.

 

Add a negative effect because of its really high ATK when its first summoned.

 

Like, destroy this card when it destroys a monster, or lose 900 LP every time you destroy a monster.

 

ATK and DEF both high, usually its a high ATK OR a high DEF, 2900ATK, 300DEF... or 300ATK, 2900 DEF. You get the idea. :P

 

 

I hope this helps you when making more cards :D[/align]

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Correction:

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Realeasing 2 FIRE monsters you control. During the turn this card was Normal Summoned' date=' increase the ATK and DEF[/b'] of this card increases by 1000 untill your End Phase.''

 

[align=center]I fixed the fixed OCG by JVR.

 

The effect is too short, maybe try adding more to the effect or giving it something more, whether its Graveyard related or whatever, just a little more.

 

Add a negative effect because of its really high ATK when its first summoned.

 

Like, destroy this card when it destroys a monster, or lose 900 LP every time you destroy a monster.

 

ATK and DEF both high, usually its a high ATK OR a high DEF, 2900ATK, 300DEF... or 300ATK, 2900 DEF. You get the idea. :P

 

 

I hope this helps you when making more cards :D[/align]

give him a break he's a 1 star =D

i do agree on the lowering the ATK and DEF a little, and giving it a slight negative drawback, like the cost of 500 Life Points or something like that =D the picture is a little blurry and the ocg errors are already stated =D its not a bad card

7/10 keep trying =F <-- my newest smiley Buck toothed Fred =D

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