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Refreshing Spell Card (~Demonic Queen~) - Needs help with ocg


【Demonic Queen】

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Alright I made a new card but I am not sure what the correct ocg was, I am kinda experimenting with weird spell cards original effects, Rate and ocg please. Hope you like it

 

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Effect:

Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, both players select a card from there hand and discard them. The player which card first letter appears first in the alphabet can draw 2 cards. If both players discarded Monster Cards draw one card. If both players discarded Spell Cards the player won can Special Summon a Level 4 or lower Monster Card. If both players discarded a Trap Card the player who won adds 1 Spell Card from their Graveyard to your hand. If both players discarded Ritual Monster Cards the player who won takes control of 1 monster on your opponent's side field.

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Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, both players select a card from there hand and discard them. The card which first letter appears first in the alphabet can draw 2 cards.

<(how can a card draw cards?)

 

If both players discarded Monster Cards draw 1 extra card. If both players discarded Spell Cards the player won can Special Summon a Level 4 or lower Monster Card. If both players discarded a Trap Card the player who won add's 1 Spell Card from your Graveyard to yourtheir hand. If both players discarded a Ritual Monster Cards

 

the player who won take's control of 1 monster on your opponent's side field.

 

[align=center]I cant find a decent way to give correct OCG except by making it really really long, I Understand your concept, but its a long one. :P

 

I sorry to admit to it, but i had trouble on this one. :?

 

I pointed out a little fix you need to make and changed the odd thing. :D

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Once per turn' date=' during your Standby Phase, both players select a card from there hand and discard them. [u']The card which first letter appears first in the alphabet can draw 2 cards.[/u]

<(how can a card draw cards?)

 

If both players discarded Monster Cards draw 1 extra card. If both players discarded Spell Cards the player won can Special Summon a Level 4 or lower Monster Card. If both players discarded a Trap Card the player who won add 1 Spell Card from your Graveyard to your hand. If both players discarded a Ritual Monster Cards

 

the player who won take control of 1 monster on your opponents side field.

 

[align=center]I cant find a decent way to give correct OCG except by making it really really long, I Understand your concept, but its a long one. :P

 

I sorry to admit to it, but i had trouble on this one. :?

 

I pointed out a little fix you need to make and changed the odd thing. :D

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;)

 

Well Any advice is welcome and I know I had lots of trouble with this card, I don't think the won thing is ocg correct, but either that or long description, if I would leave it out completely it would be a dull card and if I would leave the won part out it would become OP.

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[align=center]Well, true, however, your quote is older than my post... :P I might edit it quite often when i spot more errors, i always make tiny changes ;)

 

I still can't think of a better term for your 'won'.

 

EDIT: what if the card doesn't start with a letter like A, but a number like 5?

 

Image Credit? :P

 

:P Good luck on this card or more cards later on! :D[/align]

 

 

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[align=center]Meh, I hate making cards like them :P You can't get help from Yugioh Wikia :D

 

I like your unique style in cards, seems kinda Gothic :P

 

Have you seen those new Sub-Types on the YCMaker, i was like "WTF man GTFO".

 

Hope you don't mind, but i appear to be making you a 'member card', i dont know why, but im going to edit it in Paint to get the '【】'... :P

 

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:P ;)

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[align=center]Fairy's have wings don't they? :lol: <-(hate that face) :D

 

and I could have called it a Fiend, but fiends are like fiendish wrinkly things, fairy made it seem like it was supposed to be good, but turned evil.[/align]


[align=center]Anyway, thanks for the +REP (ill rep you back :P

 

if you like, you can comment in my new Thread?

 

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-98600.html

 

You dont have to, just as were good friends and all ;)[/align]

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