Hyper Lance Drago [/thread]

[Luna Diviner]

Name: Hyper Lance Drago

Attribute: WIND

Types: Dragon/Gemini

Level: 5 ******

ATK/DEF: 2100/1700

[spoiler=Effect]

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

Once per turn, you can discard 1 Dragon-Type monster to increase the ATK of all face-up monsters your opponent controls by 100 x the Level of the discarded monster. When this card is removed from the field, Special Summon as many monsters as possible from your Graveyard with an ATK equal to or less than the difference between this cards ATK and mean of the ATK of all the monsters your opponent controls.

 

 

 

CnC. Enjoy ^_^

[PremierAameer]

Really complicated and has pointless drawbacks

 

It has some really interesting parts tho

 

Especially the increase Opp monster's Atk

 

Also ur OCG is a little confusing towards the middle.

[Luna Diviner]

I didn't want to do that but I thought that people would complain it's overpowered.

[PremierAameer]

Don't fear OPness

Adding random drawbacks doesn't lower the OP factor

It's like putting perfume on a hobo

It just masks it

Make the card the way you want to

Then gradually make it weaker until it is no longer OP

[Luna Diviner]

I took out maximum and removed the drawback. Anything else?

[PremierAameer]

I would say take out the "mean" part because most YGO fans have the attention span of a rubber band. All the computing throws ppl off. So say something like "With the lowest/highest ATK" And to make it seem more like Dragon support, add "Dragon-Type" to "monsters as possible"

Since your card is a lv5 Dragon you don't want to put too much into it. Especially since it's a Gemini that takes as much as 3 turns to pull out it's full effect, you don't want the effect to linger so much.

A simple to-the point effect is what you want to go for. After the changes I made I can already think of several possible combos.

 

Hope this helped =)

 

Here's my edit:

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

Once per turn, you can discard 1 Dragon-Type Monster from your hand to decrease the ATK of all face-up monsters your opponent controls by the Level of the discarded monster x 100. When this card is removed from the field, Special Summon as many Dragon-Type Monsters as possible from your Graveyard with an ATK equal to or less than the difference between this monster's ATK and the ATK of 1 monster with the lowest ATK on your opponent's side of the field.

[Luna Diviner]

I would take your edit but then practically the entire card will be yours.

[PremierAameer]

Nah It's your card

that's what edits are for

I'm just glad I can help and look forward to seeing more cards from you