Ookami Moriyama Posted February 2, 2009 Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 Here it is rate/comment/fix [spoiler=Effect]This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: ● Roll a six-sided die. This card gets the following effects, based on the results: 1: Your opponent discards the top 3 cards of his/her Deck to the Graveyard. 2: You discard the top 2 card of your Deck to the Graveyard. 3: Draw 1 card from your Deck. If the card you draw is a Trap Card, increase your Life points by 300. 4: Your opponent draws 1 card from his/her Deck. If the card he/she draws is a Trap Card, your opponent loses 200 Life Points. 5: Destroy 1 card on the field. 6: Sent this card to the Graveyard and decrease your Life Points by 500. credit: horus-goddess.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 oh come on anyone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Ok well, IMO, it's way too many effects to choose from. Make it a mild 3. Something about the picture seems too, "drawingy" looking. I like the 1st effect though and the name is not bad. OCG FIX: This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: (You just canceled out the effect with this.● Roll a 6-sided die. Activate 1 of the following effects based on the results: 1: Your opponent discards the top 3 cards from his/her Deck to the Graveyard. 2: You discard the top 2 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard. 3: Draw 1 card from your Deck. If the card you draw is a Trap Card, increase your Life Points by 300. 4: Your opponent draws 1 card from his/her Deck. If the card he/she draws is a Trap Card, your opponent loses 200 Life Points. 5: Destroy 1 card on the field. 6: Send this card to the Graveyard and decrease your Life Points by 500. Also, I don't see how that 6th effect helps you in any way?... Anyways, it is a good idea, fix the OCG and maybe a better pic. Overall, 8.8/10 Edit: The part that I put in parenthesis, to start, I don't think you can Normal Summon a monster while it's already on the field, I didn't get that part at all. Because, you said in the 1st sentence that it's already treated as a Normal Monster if it's face-up on the field. So you need to either delete the second line, or do some rewording. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Ok well' date=' IMO, it's way too many effects to choose from. Make it a mild 3. Something about the picture seems too, "drawingy" looking. I like the 1st effect though and the name is not bad. OCG FIX: This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: [b'](You just canceled out the effect with this.[/b]● Roll a 6-sided die. Activate 1 of the following effects based on the results: 1: Your opponent discards the top 3 cards from his/her Deck to the Graveyard. 2: You discard the top 2 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard. 3: Draw 1 card from your Deck. If the card you draw is a Trap Card, increase your Life Points by 300. 4: Your opponent draws 1 card from his/her Deck. If the card he/she draws is a Trap Card, your opponent loses 200 Life Points. 5: Destroy 1 card on the field. 6: Send this card to the Graveyard and decrease your Life Points by 500. Also, I don't see how that 6th effect helps you in any way?... Anyways, it is a good idea, fix the OCG and maybe a better pic. Overall, 8.8/10 how I canceled the effect the effect just activates after I Normal Summon the card and it is treated as an Effect Monster thx for the fix six-sided die is correct OCG (I'm sure about this) sorry about Life points, I always write Life Points, but this time I wasn't careful sorry Choke listen up (well read "up") it is a Gemini Monster, got it Gemini all Gemini monsters have the same effect; it is a sub-type I know it is confusing, but this are the cards and the rules last effect is for balance anyone else wants to rate/fix/coment? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Ok I understand. I'm not to fond of Gemini's. Going to elaborate on that "cancelling" issue. This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect. Ok, so both "face-up's" are in bold. In the 1st sentence, you are indicating that it is already treated as a Normal Monster when it is face-up on the field/Graveyard. In the 2nd sentence, you are negating the effect of the 1st sentence by then treating as an Effect Monster while it is face-up on the field. You need to like erase a "face-up" in 1 sentence. Now if I'm getting what you mean, from my point of view, it seems like your saying like if it's a 5+ monster, you can send a Tribute to treat this card as an Effect Monster. But when you Normal Summoned it in the 1st place, it was treated as a Normal Monster. So in other words, you need to send 2 monsters as a Tribute to treat this as an Effect Monster for Level 5-6 monsters.Alright nvm, totally disregard what I've said. I have no clue about Gemini's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Ok I understand. I'm not to fond of Gemini's. Going to elaborate on that "cancelling" issue. This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field' date=' you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect. Ok, so both "face-up's" are in bold. In the 1st sentence, you are indicating that it is already treated as a Normal Monster when it is [b']face-up[/b] on the field/Graveyard. In the 2nd sentence, you are negating the effect of the 1st sentence by then treating as an Effect Monster while it is face-up on the field. You need to like erase a "face-up" in 1 sentence. Now if I'm getting what you mean, from my point of view, it seems like your saying like if it's a 5+ monster, you can send a Tribute to treat this card as an Effect Monster. But when you Normal Summoned it in the 1st place, it was treated as a Normal Monster. So in other words, you need to send 2 monsters as a Tribute to treat this as an Effect Monster for Level 5-6 monsters. it is "While this card is face-up on the field, you can......." it means that if it is face-up (cuz your opponent can destroy it between turns), you can Normal Summon it again, instead of Normal Summoning from your hand, you get the hang of it about Levels 5+, I think you need 2 or more Tributes for a card though I never saw a 5+ Gemini monster till now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Ya read what I said under it, I understand nothing about Gemini's disregard everything :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Ya read what I said under it' date=' I understand nothing about Gemini's disregard everything :/[/quote'] yeah it's hard to understand I was the same my first Gemini Monster... I wanted to throw it away, cuz I didn't know how to use it well, a good frieng of mine helped me. try to find some TCG rules about Gemini's on the web Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Megacyber Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 OCG errors, so 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 OCG errors' date=' so 8.4/10[/quote'] Thankyou. Anyone else want's to rate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 a monster version of Dangerous Machine Type 6. Certainly quite versatile though. I'll give it an 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Katsuya Jonouchi (Joey Wheeler for the dubbies) would probably LOVE to use this card. The image is okay. Effect is a walking variation of Dangerous Machine Type-6 (as ragnarok1945 already mentioned). OCG was already mentioned. Overall, a potent little Gemini. 9.5/10 for you! =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the worm Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 8.9/10. Would be 9 if i could SEE the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 a monster version of Dangerous Machine Type 6. Certainly quite versatile though. I'll give it an 8.5/10 that's the point; you can now use the effect and attack at the same time Thankyou for rating Katsuya Jonouchi (Joey Wheeler for the dubbies) would probably LOVE to use this card. The image is okay. Effect is a walking variation of Dangerous Machine Type-6 (as ragnarok1945 already mentioned). OCG was already mentioned. Overall' date=' a potent little Gemini. 9.5/10 for you! =D[/quote'] I've never think about that though Joey was my favorite for a while Thankyou ^_^ 8.9/10. Would be 9 if i could SEE the effect. the effect is right there in the SPOILER it says "Click to Wiew" thx anyone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the worm Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 It just to small to see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 It just to small to see. not on the card below the card is a spoiler "Effect (Click to Wiew)" is there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God-Card-Master Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 good card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2009 Thankyou God-Card-Master ^_^ anyone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UGHAR Posted March 1, 2009 Report Share Posted March 1, 2009 Good 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted March 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 Thankyou ^_^ anyone else wants to rate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted March 4, 2009 Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 Very good for a n00b and a newb. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted March 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 Very good for a n00b and a newb. sorry, but I don't think I'm a newb or a n00b... or am I?... no, I'm not thx anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted March 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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