Chaotic Angel Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 First time.. Making this Fan-Fic! So please give positive feedback! Note: Appearances coming up later. This plot takes place right after Part 4 in the Role Play. Plot: Ron revives, but he's still weak. The Gold Academy is long gone and students had to move back to the Duel Academy, but Ron was there before everyone else.. [spoiler=Characters:][spoiler=Ron Yim:]Age: 14 Gender: Male Side: Neutral Appearance: Coming up later Biography: Ron has been in a lot of trouble recently and needs help, but the only thing wrong with him is, turning Evil. [spoiler=Agas Constentine:]Age: 14 Gender: Female Side: Good Appearance: Coming up later Biography: Cares for Ron, she has an insane crush on him in the Role Play, but when she acted insane, she had no choice other than kill someone called Constance. [spoiler=Kyle Constentine:]Age: 12 Gender: Male Side: Good Appearance: Coming up later Biography: Agas' brother, he cares for nothing other than Agas and Ron, when he met Constance, he was terrified of her. [spoiler=Constance Prodigy:]Age: 11 Gender: Female Side:Evil Appearance: Coming up later Biography: An evil and brutal 11 year old who cares for nothing, until she met Ron, who she plays around with as a toy. She is also Nick's cousin. [spoiler=Nicholas Prodigy:]Age: 14 Gender: Male Side: Good Appearance: Coming up later Biography: Nick is a carefree man who never gives up on anything. His cousin, Constance however, has killed him twice in a row. How can he still survive? [spoiler=Yuki Prodigy:]Age: 13 Gender: Female Side: Good Appearance: Coming up later Biography: He hates having to observe Constance cutting Ron up like a toy, doesn't care about boys other than Ron. She tries to keep Constance, her cousin away from Ron as much as possible. More characters coming up soon. [spoiler=Chapter 1: The past arrives..]Ron wakes up in the Duel Academy, looking tired. He found a Duel Disk and a note from Crowler. It said: "Meet me in the classroom, I have a favor for you.." As soon as Ron read the note, he went to the classroom, still feeling tired. Then Agas came to the academy with two heavy suitcases, she said: "Man, I can't handle the lot.. Too heavy!" then the guards in Obelisk Blue said: "No worries, Miss Constentine.. I'll do the rest for you.." and then Kyle came over with a criminal, who has a chainsaw with her. Kyle said: "This eleven-year-old girl has been brutal to my parents, now our parents are dead!" The criminal smirked and started the chainsaw. Agas took the chainsaw and said: "Who are you?" Constance replied: "I'm Constance.. Constance Prodigy.."and then Agas snapped the chainsaw. As soon as Ron wakes up, he finds Constance with dangerous weapons and said: "What? You, dangerous weapons? You brutal girl! Come with me.." and then dragged her to the boys dorm. [spoiler=Chapter 2: Ron turns into a Shadow Rider.. Once again!]When Ron arrives at the Boy's Dorm, he said to Constance: "Don't think about brutally stabbing people in the heart!" and threw Constance out of the dorm. He then takes some rest in his room. After that, a boy challenged him in a duel, but Ron refused and kicked the boy out. After a few hours, He woke up and sensed the Shadow Rider's power.. Ron went to the Shadow Realm and there, he became a Shadow Rider! After all this has happened, Agas sensed very dark power and put her duel disk on. She went to the Shadow Realm and said: "That's weird.. I sensed darkness that powerful and no one's here?" Then Ron popped out, all gold and said: "Well, hello.." and nothing more. Agas then said: "Who are you?!" but Ron didn't replied as he disappeared. Agas went mad and said: "Pfft.. I shouldn't of went there in the first place.." and walked off. The next morning arrives at 6:05am, Nick was unpacking his stuff in the Boy's Dorm and said: "Stupid academy has to stupidly explode.. God-damn that academy!" Even Agas heard it, she went to Nick and said to him: "I know, Nick.. But one good news and one bad.. Good news is: Ron's back. Bad news.. He's a Shadow Rider.." Nick grew mad and ran off his room like 30 cheetahs. [spoiler=Chapter 3: A duel against a Shadow Rider! Part 1]Ron starts planning something evil in the Finals Arena and said: "Anyone who comes after me is going to die I TELL THEM!" and laughs evily. He then told the rest of the Shadow Riders: "Scatter round and capture souls of innocent students!" and laughs once again. The Shadow riders started scattering around looking for students, but Ron stood. Meanwhile, back at the Gold Academy, Nick said: "Damn those Shadow Riders.. I'd better stop Ron before things get worse! Damn!" and then one of the Shadow Riders, Nightshroud appeared. He said: "Mind if I borrow your soul?" Nick didn't reply, pushed Nightshroud out of his way and walked off. Yuki came to Nick and said: "Shadow Riders again.. I suggest.." Nick didn't reply and went looking for Ron. Soon after that, Ron appeared and said: "Well, hello.. Nick.. Like my new self?" Nick turned around and said: "Oh.. Crap! I'm too late!" and then slashed Ron with his Duel Disk. Ron took the hit and said: "Immature.. You can do better than that!" and cleaned his blood. Ron then said: "Think if you wanna duel me.. Because you'll lose!" and disappears. [spoiler=Chapter 4: A duel against a Shadow Rider! Part 2]Nick didn't say a thing when Ron disappears and goes back to his room. Yuki said to Nick: "Man, Ron's become more confident and stronger by the minute!" Then Agas appears and said to Yuki and Nick: "Well, he is strong, but we need him back to his senses!" Ron then appears and said: "It'll be impossible, as far as I'm concerned!" and laughs evily. After an hour, he disappaers along with Agas. Kyle went up to the Prodigies and said to them: "They're always like this, I'd say.. Let's duel them and get our revenge.." This chapter has yet to be FINISHED! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 Yay you added us guys in, you rock A.C.! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted February 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 Why thank you.. We could add some more characters from the RP and make it all into an awesome Fan-Fic. EDIT: Chapter 1 up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 Agree'd, this is gonna be the greatest fan fic ever!!! EDIT: Weird first chapter but cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 I'm dizzy. I'm seriously trying to make sense of it all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 It is confusing, but thats good old A.C! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 Agh, now I lost my idea for my Fan Fic. T_T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 SIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII Go blame it on A.C. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted February 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 No one blames me for something I didn't do, that will result on a negative rep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 Unfortunately, because of your confusing Fic. I forgot, so while you did not do it intentionally, it happened. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted February 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 Okay.. Anyway, Chapter 2 will be coming soon. EDIT: Chapter 2 up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 Ok, keep it comin! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted February 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 Will do! :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 :D :D :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted February 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 Chapter 2 finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 Incredibly short. Good I guess. Except for the random just going there and becoming one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted February 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 I'm too lazy to write up long bits of Fan-Fiction.. Oh well, fixing.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 Its Ok i gess....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted February 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 Okay? C'mon! How about a bit of brainstorming? Yeah! That might help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 Ok *Brainstroms* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted February 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Chapter 3's up, but it isn't finished yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted February 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 Meh.. Screw my last post.. Chapter 3's finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 The chapters alright, keep it coming!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted February 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 Sure thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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