Lelouch Lamperouge Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 Theese are Just Some Cards I Made And They Are Quite RealisticBtw The Set Id's Are RandomOutnumbered:Dark MistressSacrifice Of EnimiesWind AssassinCall Of The WindTornado Golem Pls Rate :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 Image Credit??On cards you do not need to capitalise the first letter of every word only those significant to yugioh!Also please add a background image to wind assassin!You have some pretty good ideas though!I will rate when your cards are improved! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted February 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 Image Credit To My Friend Reiko (Why Do I Need To Post This She Said I Could Use Them) I Will Ask For A Background Pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 Even if they did, you have to say! Even if you do just say "my friend made them" that would be fine because otherwise your account could be banned if the artist didnt agree or get any credit! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 [align=center]Major OCG errors, capatalization of every word... :? Rating: Name: 3/5 Stars: 1/5 Effect: 6/10 Attribute: 3/5 Type: 3/5 ATK: 6/10 DEF: 6/10 Pic: 4/10 OCG: 1/10_________________________________TOTAL: 33/60 _________________________________ Just over 50% :) Though, this is how you can improve your cards -Read official OCG thread-Find matching images-Don't Write Like This, Its Improper And Doesn't Show Good Literacy Skills.-Find original effects and ideas.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted February 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 Thanks For The Tip Person Whom I Know But Wont Tell Me Who Yet Knows My Real Name.[align=center]Major OCG errors' date=' capatlaization of every word... :? Rating: Name: 3/5 Stars: 1/5 Effect: 6/10 Attribute: 3/5 Type: 3/5 ATK: 6/10 DEF: 6/10 Pic: 4/10 OCG: 1/10_________________________________TOTAL: 33/60 _________________________________ Just over 50% :) Though, this is how you can improve your cards -Read official OCG thread-Find matching images-Dont Write Like This, its inproper and doesnt show good literacy skills.-Find original efects and ideas.[/b'][/align] Thanks For The Tip Just Found This Site So It's Just Noob Stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 [off topic] ok ive replied to your message now you know who I am [return to topic]its always good to help!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted February 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 *Offtopic*Yh I Had My Suspisions DarkAnarchist.*Offtopic*Anyways This Art Is By My Friend Reiko She Is 17 And Is Taking A Art Course In Anime So Lets Me View Work She Makes Or Edits.__________________________I Might Make A Set But Need A Theme.Ideas People!A Few More Cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 Nice cards you clearly have a lot of talent (as does your 17 yr old friend) But stop capitalising the beginning of every word and read the OCG thread in important threads things will become a hell of a lot easier from then on my friend. Other than the errors peopple have pointed out your cards are actually very good. Nightmare Magician is well thought out !!If improved properly I'd give them 9/10 !!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bradthecanivingfootlicker Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 Meh, TCG errors and uhm, you don't have to capitalize EVERYTHING. You should put pic credit in the circulation. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 How come every beginning letter on each word on your card is capitalized? Only certain terms like "Special Summoned", "Spells" etc should the first letter of the word be capitalized. The images are fine but fix the OCG a bit, you're a new member so I'll go easy on you with my rating 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Thanks Everyone, These Are My First Cards And Next Time I'll Make The Improvements You Have Talked About.Many Thanks.Cove. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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