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Pic credit=Photobucket and Deviantart by Jason Eagle (which is the first 1) and Quicksilverfury of Deviantart

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[spoiler=Effect of The Holy Dragon]this card cannot be normal summoned or set this card cannot be special summoned except by removing from play 4 Holy monsters on the field. Each time a Monster is Summoned put 1 "Holy" counter on this card (max 8). By removing 4 "Holy" counters on this card when a Monster is summoned you can decrease that monsters ATK by 2000 if the monsters ATK is reached to 0 special summon that card to your side of the field. By removing 10 "Holy" Counters anywhere on the field, you can destroy all cards you control and Special Summon as many Holy monsters from your graveyard as possible. You cannot activate any of these effects the turn this card is summoned.

 

[spoiler=Effect of Holy dawn dragon]1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

When the effect of a Trap card is activated you can pay 800 Life points to negated the effect of that card and destroy it. Then put 1 Holy Counter on this card. by removing ant number of Holy counters on this card when a monster is summoned you can reduce that monsters ATK by 400 for each Holy counter you removed with this cards effect.

 

 

[spoiler=effect of Holy Valley Dragon]1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters.

This cards ATK and DEF becomes the combine total of ATK of the monsters used to Synchro Summon this card. When this attacks a Level 4 or lower monster you can pay 1000 Life points to special summon that monster to your side of the field instead. For each Face up Level 4 or lower monster on the field once per turn this card gains 300 ATK 9if you activate this effect Level 4 or lower monsters cannot ATK this turn).

 

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IMO your names make no sense at all. "Holy Lightning" is saying that the "Lightning" is holy. That really doesn't make sense. You should try rewording to "Holy Dragon of Lightning". All of the cards with "of the" are okay.

 

Need to work on capitalization. Capitalize these:

 

Special Summon

Normal Summon

Summon

Tribute Summon

Attack Position

Defense Position

ATK

DEF

Life Points

 

 

Have some grammatical errors, example: On the last card, "lose" is spelled "loose".\

 

Overall, it's a good general idea, but I'm not that appealed by it. 8/10.

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