Alastar Rainford Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 Basically These cards will be based around the effects of other Planet,Sun,or Moon cards all being Fairies/Angels. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 a liitle fix This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card is removed from your field, destroy 1 card on the field and activate 1 of the following effect based on the type of the destroyed card: - Spell Card: Special Summon Solar Mage - Haruki" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. - Trap Card: inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. - Monster Card: Remove this card from play. nice card but I think it is better to discard 1 random card from your hand to activate an effect, instead of destroying 1 card on the field. This way the card won't be OP 9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 nice card. do the reparations. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 a liitle fix This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card is removed from your field' date=' destroy 1 card on the field and activate 1 of the following effect based on the type of the destroyed card: - Spell Card: Special Summon Solar Mage - Haruki" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. - Trap Card: inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. - Monster Card: Remove this card from play. nice card but I think it is better to discard 1 random card from your hand to activate an effect, instead of destroying 1 card on the field. This way the card won't be OP 9.6/10[/quote']no more like this: This card cannot be destroyed by Battle. When this card is Removed from ---- Play, destroy 1 card on the field and activate 1 of the following effects based on the type of the destroyed card: * Spell Card: Special Summon Solar Mage - Haruki" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. * Trap Card: inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points.* Monster Card: Remove this card from play. [spoiler=what the underline, and bold means]If underlined means: changed/got rid of a/few word/sIf in bold means: fixed capitalized words/made words capitalized/made plural. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 These = Epic idea. Fix your OCG. 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 a liitle fix This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card is removed from your field' date=' destroy 1 card on the field and activate 1 of the following effect based on the type of the destroyed card: - Spell Card: Special Summon Solar Mage - Haruki" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. - Trap Card: inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. - Monster Card: Remove this card from play. nice card but I think it is better to discard 1 random card from your hand to activate an effect, instead of destroying 1 card on the field. This way the card won't be OP 9.6/10[/quote']no more like this: This card cannot be destroyed by Battle. When this card is Removed from ---- Play, destroy 1 card on the field and activate 1 of the following effects based on the type of the destroyed card: * Spell Card: Special Summon Solar Mage - Haruki" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. * Trap Card: inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points.* Monster Card: Remove this card from play. [spoiler=what the underline, and bold means]If underlined means: changed/got rid of a/few word/sIf in bold means: fixed capitalized words/made words capitalized/made plural. According to the OCG/Grammar thread you don't capalise the B from by battle. I'm pretty sure Sasuke Pitsure was right about not capitalizing Removed from Play. If you remove the "from your field" part its effect would also activated it it was removed from your deck/hand/graveyard. I like its effect but I don't understand why you named them Solar Fighters, what does it have to do with the Solar System? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MysticalElf Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 GREAT CARD, NICE PIC, GOD AFFECT, OVERALL NICE CARD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deloge Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 Ooh, nice cards! Make another one! Should I rate it? If yes, it would be... 8/10, maybe? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 no more like this: This card cannot be destroyed by Battle. When this card is Removed from ---- Play' date=' destroy 1 card on the field and activate 1 of the following effect[b']s[/b] based on the type of the destroyed card: * Spell Card: Special Summon Solar Mage - Haruki" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. * Trap Card: inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points.* Monster Card: Remove this card from play. [spoiler=what the underline, and bold means]If underlined means: changed/got rid of a/few word/sIf in bold means: fixed capitalized words/made words capitalized/made plural. My OCG is not perfect, but I know very well how to write "by battle" and "remove from play" you should improve your OCG According to the OCG/Grammar thread you don't capalise the B from by battle. I'm pretty sure Sasuke Pitsure was right about not capitalizing Removed from Play. If you remove the "from your field" part its effect would also activated it it was removed from your deck/hand/graveyard. I like its effect but I don't understand why you named them Solar Fighters' date=' what does it have to do with the Solar System?[/quote'] Thanks Alordzynix it seems that somebody at least read the rules. Sorry Haruki Adachi for posting this on your thread, but I needed to say that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 it is okstill looking for images Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 not bad of a card, but merely sending this card off the field almost makes it too versatile. You should have said if this card is send to the graveyard, THEN you destroy one card and activate 1 of the 3 effects. Rating: 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 It only Special summons a level 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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