Deloge Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 Um, hi guys. Im new in this forum and.. I found making card is interesting, even it takes a long time for me to think for the effect and names. By the way, lets just get to the main point. I made a card and, well.. its not too good. As im a new user here. [align=center]This card is not treated as a LIGHT monster when it is face-up on the field. Once per turn, declare 1 Attribute. This card also treated as the Attribute you choose till the next of your Standby Phases. This card gain 500 ATK for every Monster Card that is sent to the graveyard and have a same Attribute with this card. Also, if this card is destroyed, destroy all face-up monster that have same Attribute with this card.angelmarthy.deviantart.com 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Machine-Type monsterThis card cannot attack your opponent directly. This card inflicts Piercing Damage. If this card destroyed and sent to the graveyard, Special Summon 1 level 4 Machine-Type monster from your deck.maxarkes.deviantart.com[/align] Please tell me if there was an error or overpowered. Thanks for looking Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 Nice to see New members can follow credit rules. Have a look at my OCG thread for correct Card Effect Presentations. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 [align=center]Very nice, original and well thought out cards, much better than most other new guys cards, i was expecting a 'super sayain goku' or 'optimus prime'w with 9000 ATK. But no, you managed to follow all rules of 'realistic' and made them look authentic, I think, that your time on YCMaker will be a good and well appreciated one, i really do look forward to seeing more cards from you! :P *thumbs up* :D Try to remember OCg terms such as: graveyard = Graveyard deck = Deck but, hand = hand (not Hand) ;) Rating: Name: 4/5 Stars: 5/5 Effect: 9/10 Attribute: 4/5 Type: 4/5 ATK: 8/10 DEF: 9/10 Pic: 9/10 OCG: 9/10_________________________________TOTAL: 51/60 _________________________________ and as i always say, 52/60 means your cards are on their way to perfection, you are just edging awesome cards! Superb for a new member :D im really impressed with these, I will even give you a +REP to show my appreciation. :P[/align] P.S.: Do not reply directly to this post, if you wish to contact me, do it via PM. Its the best to ensure a quick reply. I will help you with OCG or finding suitable images ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deloge Posted February 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 Thank you so much Osiris & Yuji :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Liger Zero Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 Cool cards 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MysticalElf Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 GREAT CARDS, NICE PICS, NICE EFFECTS, OVERALL NICE CARD (DO I USE THE WORD NICE TOO MUCH:?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 AWESOME! 10/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 Remember to capitilise Graveyard and Deck! ^_^ But I must say, splendid for a new member, keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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