First Card I MADE !!!!!!! post AT WILL I WANT TO KNOW what i did wrong

[Womi]

shorten your sig!

[beamsabre]

Shok's cost is way too high to keep him on the field. Have the cards come from your deck instead of your hand during the Standby Phase. The third effect makes him overpowered (2450 beatstick or does 1225 direct damage). Give him an extra cost for direct attack (perhaps switching to Defense Mode for two turns if you directly attack successfully). Great image..clear up the OCG errors...6/10.

 

Uh...the other card's creepy, dude. 5/10