Dream Dragon Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 [align=center]My newest Cards Hopefullly better then the others I will hope for all people to comment and tell me the score you give me please i need every bit of advice No the Cards are not gold[/align] This card can only be summoned, flip summoned, or special summoned when there is a "Golden Wing enhancement - Gold Dragon on your side of the field. This card is unaffected by any spell cards. Fast in The Air this monster breathes fire on its enemys. Activate only if you have Golden Dragon on the field. Thanks Google www.goodreads.com sorry cant find Second picture www.elfwood.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xzMasteRzx Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 OGC errors: On "Golden Wing Enhancement" = This card can only be equipped to "Golden Dragon". On "Golden Dragon Of The Sun" = This card can only be Normal Summoned or Special Summoned by sacrificing "Golden Dragon" equipped with "Golden Wing Enhancement" on your side of the field. This card is unaffected by Spell Cards. Some other people will help you out if I got this wrong but very nice try!!!! I like the idea that you made a gold dragon. Just try and fix the cards a little and you'll be fine. Score: 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MVP1991 Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 First off, what does Golden Wing Enhancement do anyways? Is it just a meaningless equip card? In fact, it's only a normal spell, what gives? And the second one is OP'ed. And yeah, vanillas are boring... 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scrooge Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Hmmmm i think the correct OCG (Official Card Grammar) would be: This card can only be Summoned when there is a face up "Golden Dragon" equiped with "Golden Wing Enchacement" on your side of the Field.This monster is unaffected by Spell Cards. Rename the first card into Golden Sun Dragon,I think it's better. For the Golden Wing try: This Equip card can only be equiped to one "Golden Dragon". Change this card into an equip card and give it effect that supports Golden Dragon. You could also try giving Golden Dragon an effect to extend it's survival and make it less boring. Lastly I think that Golden Dragon of the sun is overpowered.Reduce it's stats. For a newbie your OCG outstanding!Keep it up!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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