Poopooman123 Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 fire magician lvl 4http://media.photobucket.com/image/sorcceress/foxfire3217/firejpq.jpg?o=1Each time your opponent draws a card(s), put 1 Spell Counter on this card (max. 5). Increase your ATK of this card by 200 for each Spell Counter on this card. If 5 Spell Counters are on this card, During the Standby Phase of your next turn increase the ATK and DEF of one monster on the field by 2000, or by sending this face-up card with 5 Spell Counters on it to the graveyard, Speacial Summon 1 "Fire Magician lvl 8" from your hand or deck. fire magician lvl 8http://media.photobucket.com/image/anime%20fire%20mage/windofanime/anime%20types/Mage%20and%20Sorcerer/1143147763_es9c5fe774.jpg?o=19This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. this card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Fire Magician lvl 4". While this card remains face-up on your side of the field, increase the ATK and DEF of this card for each monster on the field by 100. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 If that's your first card, then I'd have to say, you have potential.- Now your grammar could use work, like instead of ur try your. - It would help if you would make the Level 8 monster as well. - 500 ATK for each counter is abit much. Try 200 or 300.- The name of the monster says Level 1 yet the card shows level 4. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Poopooman123 Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 If that's your first card' date=' then I'd have to say, you have potential.- Now your grammar could use work, like instead of ur try your. - It would help if you would make the Level 8 monster as well. - 500 ATK for each counter is abit much. Try 200 or 300.- The name of the monster says Level 1 yet the card shows level 4.[/quote'] yes this is my first try i will go ahead and fix these problams u pointed out right now so yea... allrightythen anyone else got anything else to say then tell meand ill gice u +1 rep arpeejajo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Thanks for the rep. You should also change the ur to your. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 spell counter=Spell Counter(max 5)=(max. 5) too much like silent magician for my liking... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Poopooman123 Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 wats silent magician i just started this site and i read the ocg grammer thing so yea... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Silent_Magician_LV4 there ya go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Poopooman123 Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 cool just to let u know i dont have any cards so i didnt know i was copiing but is it atleast good for a nooby XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 yeah as far as a new member I guess... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Woah an exact replica. XDPoopooman123, bookmark that site, it's a very useful resource for cards. I didn't even realize how similar the effects were. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 your lv 8 has virtually the exact same effect as Horus lv8 does, even the stats are the same Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 you can't bump unless 24 hours have passed[/offtopic] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Poopooman123 Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 i can tell u guys one thing i like these first two cards i made XD just got back from school [/offtopic] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Yes, they are good, but try to be more original. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Poopooman123 Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 ok i have a new card comeing out right now im posting it after this post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the worm Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 You have incredible potenial for the first card.But the only problem with the level 8 one is that, it already has 3000 ATK, a very high amount, which IS okay, but the added effect of "increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 300 points for each monster on the field" makes it a bit overpowered. If there are 4 other monsters on your side, and 5 on your opponent's, that would give it 5700 ATK and 3500 DEF, and it's a level 8. Try fixing that.Overall i'd rate 8/10 for the card, 9.5/10 for first try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Poopooman123 Posted February 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 Fixed for worm i guess lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiod9979 Posted February 7, 2009 Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 Good Job Not As Many Ocg Errors, As Every Other New Card Maker Who Are Very nubbish and werid....and have no potentiol, unlike,you....... VERY LONG SENTANCE[/OFFTOPIC] anyways thesse are very simallar as stated to other context, it is preety simmilar silent mage, or magician as we say, i say it shorter, anyways i gonna give 9/10 because your only new and if thosse mistakes where made by 3 stars it would be about 7/10maybe 8/10 Good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Poopooman123 Posted February 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 thanks XD comeing out with a magic card right now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiod9979 Posted February 7, 2009 Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 BTW First one dont look like a Magician here is one.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Poopooman123 Posted February 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 thanks but im gana keep mine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Poopooman123 Posted February 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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