Deloge Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Nothing special, really [align=center]Nalro.deviantart.com Nalro.deviantart.com[/align] yeah, both art was done by Nalro. Please Rate, Comment & Enjoy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Well I can't really see how anyone could rly rate this beside the names.... you names are pretty original. Although, both have same ATK/DEF. The descriptions are kind of cheesy/cliched. Sorry 6/10. Spice it up a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deloge Posted February 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Well I can't really see how anyone could rly rate this beside the names.... you names are pretty original. Although' date=' both have same ATK/DEF. The descriptions are kind of cheesy/cliched. Sorry 6/10. Spice it up a bit.[/quote']I know it sucked. Sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Well I wouldn't say they suck, their good, I would use them, but it's not very "interesting" without an effect. Just as you said, "its nothing special" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 no effects weighs it down, so 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deloge Posted February 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Ok, I change it to an Effect monster Please Re-Comment and Rate :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Eh I guess it's a little better. They both have the same effects, just one is about Light and one's about DARK. You have OCG mistakes. FIX 1st Card:Increase the DEF of this card by 100 for every LIGHT monster on your side of the field. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, destroy 1 card your opponent controls.FIX 2nd Card: Increase the DEF of this card by 100 for every DARK monster on your side of the field. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you and your opponent remove 1 card that they control from play. 6.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Well it appears Choke has fixed the OCG. Not much wrong with it, though you could be a little more original with the effects. Also, they require drawbacks, as where comes great power comes sacrifise. Though very nice for a new member. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deloge Posted February 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Thanks all. Especially Choke. But is that right that we can change "on your side of the field" to "you control"? I remember read it on OCG thread.. Or was I mistaken? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Well I think you can do it either way. I'm more of a fan of "on your side of the field". I think control could mean like in your hand? or your Graveyard? Idk. Ask someone else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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