my first 4 cards :)

[jimjim438]

Most have faced this deadly dragon, and few have survived

This card can only be summoned by Tribute of "Black Dragon" from your side of the field.

Must remove 3 monsters on the field from play which has at least 1 "Deadly Black Dragon". Each "Deadly Black Dragon" removed from play gives 300 ATK points

Remove "Black Dragon", "Deadly Black Dragon", and "Advanced Black Dragon" from play from the field or graveyard, then take away half your life points. This card cannot be destroyed by a Trap, Spell, Or Magic. If this monster destroys an opposing monster, this card equips it with that monster and gains 1000 ATK and DEF points. If this monster gets destroyed in battle by another monster, that monster is destroyed and your opponent loses 1500 life points

=P i hope u like them lol

[Spire]

summoned = Summoned

Magic = Spell

life points = Life Points

graveyard = Graveyard

 

Hmm.. the last card is somewhat overpowered, need something to balance them out as you can easily wipe out your opponent's life points.

[Guest Dark-Azkrin666]

"Deadly Black Dragon" Should say :This card can only be Special Summoned by Removing 1 "Black Dragon" from your side of the field to the Graveyard.

"Advanced Black Dragon" should say :This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set, this card can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 monsters and 1 of those selected monster must be "Deadly Black Dragon" from your side of the field to the Graveyard. This card gains 300 Atk for every "Deadly Black Dragon" removed from play

as for "End Black Dragon" its wording is correct but still a bit over powered

Over all about 8/10