Yu-Gi-Oh: The Sakadian Chronicles! [Chapter 2 Added!] Character Bios Added!!! Updated 2/25/09

[Fen.]

dude, you just said that........

[ragnarok1945]

quite impressive dueling, glad to see my character finally made her debut

[Fen.]

Did you like how I portrayed her Rag?

[ragnarok1945]

I'll have to answer that Q later on when I read the chapter PROPERLY. Right now my fever kicked back up again, so I only had time to skim the chap and give a review. You'll get another review from me later this week

[Fen.]

Oh damn, that sux. No wonder u haven't been online that much today. Well get better, and when you are, you can read my chapter a little more in depth.

[ragnarok1945]

oh never mind. I'm a fast reader anyway, and since your 2nd half the chap is devoted to the duel, I'll squeeze out a few min to try reading it again

[Fen.]

either one works with me :smile:

[ragnarok1945]

ok, from what I see so far, everything looks great for her. The only thing I'm a little uncomfortable with is her fascination about having crushes on boys. You should write a duel where her opponent is one of them, THEN we'll see how if affects her

[Fen.]

I was planning on it from the start. She's going to have a duel against the Brennan guy she saw at the Bakery. I don't know what the results of the duel will be yet, so you and I will just have to see where the story takes us.

[ragnarok1945]

if you're going to make her drool over the guy, make sure she has a reasonable audience watching the duel

[Fen.]

Probably all of Sakadia will be watching.

[ragnarok1945]

oh that's perfectly fine (I would suggest not changing her attitude also, always being the helpful kind, though I WOULD suggest you try to get her to change Erica's ways)

[Fen.]

Fine, but it's going to be in vain. Erica is obviously a stubborn girl wih too much power on her hands. But Lucian sometimes shuts her up.

[ragnarok1945]

even the most stubborn have to learn when it's time to admit defeat, one way or another, in time

[PokeMaster Jack]

I hope its my dragons that feast on her! Pretty plz?

[.:Abarai Renji:.]

No! My dear little Stephanie! Why didn´t you use any of her Elena Cards?

[Fen.]

The cards were confusing as hell and it was easier to use my Hekko spellcaster cards against Angela. I'll have her use the Elena cards in the Yugoda festival.

 

But u have to make more of them so I'll be able to actually make them her deck.

[.:Abarai Renji:.]

I´ll try to make more when I get time to, and get ideas. But I hope that Stephanie isn´t out of the fan fic yet!

[Fen.]

OH no, all characters make multiple appearances. I know how it feels when characters you create only get shown for one episode.

[.:Abarai Renji:.]

That´s good news. Hope that things are fine with you?

 

Also: Check out my new avatar and sig!

[Fen.]

I really like your sig! Which reminds me, I need to find a good tag maker for my fanfic.......

 

I'm also working on a bit of nice little updates to spice up the first page a bit.

[.:Abarai Renji:.]

Sweet, man, sweet. You know, I am not usually interested in YGO fan fics, but this one, I like! Probably because you made it, and you´re my buddy and all!

 

[spoiler=A little thing for HyuugaKing]I know this is counted as spamming, and I won´t do it again, but I just wondered if you would give my Fan Fic, The Time Legion, a second chance? I really think you will like it now!

 

[Domi the Mystery]

This fan fic is perfect. I cant wait to see more!! :D

[Fen.]

Ok final, I'll try your story again.

 

Thanks a bunch Domi, I'll make sure to update this often then.

 

UPDATE!: I added Character Bios on the front page!

[ragnarok1945]

I can see much has happened here since I left last night. Any news on the next update?