JG. Posted February 10, 2009 Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 I know it sucks, hard, but I want some CnC on how to improve it. Rate, hate, and comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted February 10, 2009 Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 I'm dissapointed =( VeryFirst off, way too plain and simple. Text is okish, though I do actually like the style...Could have better depth, since it's so plain, I don't know about flow. Colors don't fit each other. Get to dA, and download brushes and C4D's packs if ya need them, but again, plain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted February 10, 2009 Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 The thing in the face (I can't really tell) looks bad =(.Otherwise, its pretty hawt.I mean, its simple and all, but hawt =).The text is also fugly =p. Good work Sparker ;D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted February 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 Thanks both of you, but GodPuppy, it's supposed to be plain and simple. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted February 10, 2009 Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 Zen I lurv it =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted February 10, 2009 Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 In general I like it, but I find the size of your tags distracting =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Energy Posted February 10, 2009 Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 I don't like the stuff on his face.I like the rest but the size seems a little to big for the style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted February 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 In general I like it' date=' but I find the size of your tags distracting =/[/quote'] This one is 400x130 I think. What size do you think is better? This size is about what you would normally use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted February 10, 2009 Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 Hmm, maybe its just me. I'm used to 400x100 or 300x100maybe thats why I fail.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted February 10, 2009 Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 Its not your best but I like it. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Big Posted February 11, 2009 Report Share Posted February 11, 2009 Dude WTF, you used the same render and stuff from the tutorial, even same text, did you rip this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted February 11, 2009 Report Share Posted February 11, 2009 Nope.Its different. The 1st step (or one of the 1sts.) sets the thing in the face. In the tutorial the thing in the face is different.Same with the text. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted February 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2009 Dude WTF' date=' you used the same render and stuff from the tutorial, even same text, did you rip this?[/quote'] Yes I used all the stuff, but it makes the tut easier to follow, so you knwo how to do it when you use a different one. And bloody hell no I did not rip this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Big Posted February 11, 2009 Report Share Posted February 11, 2009 Next time use a different stock or render. Don't follow EVERYTHING from the tutorial. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted February 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Next time use a different stock or render. Don't follow EVERYTHING from the tutorial. That's the point, when I use the tut next time, I'll fix it a bit so that it has my personal touch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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