PrimalFear Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Here is my new card plz rate and or fix thanks [spoiler=Card] [spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending your top 5 cards on your deck to the Graveyard. This card is not effected by your opponents monster effects. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard you can Special Summon up to 2 monsters with a combined ATK equal to or lower then the ATK of this card, from your opponents or your Graveyard. [spoiler=Pic Credit]By pamansazz on DA Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Needs Image Credit. Effect Should Read (I think):"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending the top 5 cards on your Deck to the Graveyard. This card is not effected by your opponent's monster effects. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon up to 2 monsters with a combined ATK equal to or lower then the ATK of this card, from your opponent's or your Graveyard." It's a pretty good card. I give it a rating of 8.9/10. Just give image credit next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayasato-chan Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Yep. Shadow got the OCG before I did. Hmmm. Interesting card to say the least. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted February 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 yeah thanks srry about the pic credit I spazed out a little Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 at first the 2500 atk seemed a little low, but its effect makes up for it 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 at first the 2500 atk seemed a little low' date=' but its effect makes up for it 9/10[/quote'] Lolwhat? This card wouldn't really matter. It has a 5card free mill = Dumping for more useful monsters, to special summon and a Lightsworn boost. Not touched by monster effects = Great Wall. Insanely good summon effect. Overpowered, big time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 IM NOT RYIN TO BE PICKY BUT THERE ARE JUST A LOT OF MINOR DETAILS MISSING AND THE PIC IS OVERUSED IN A LOT OF DRAGON CARDS S0 6.9/10 BUT THATS BEING HARSH Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted February 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 thanks guys for the comments, and Icyblue you figured out really the basic stratgey to this card unfourtnitly I knew it was quite overpowered from the start but was hopeing some one would knock it down a few notches with a fix lol thanks anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Eh...8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Nice Work 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Cool card when reading the beggining you think that this card is very underpowered but it really does balance itself out!Good work!9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Nice card man. Nice pic and a good effect so you get a 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted February 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Well actually its quite Overpowered for what I wanted it's not as balanced as it should be. I just don't feel like changing yet lol thanks for the comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Remember to capitalize Deck, and opponents = opponent's. The only errors I found, 7.7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted February 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 thanks Spire much appreciated I will change it as soon as I can Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Effect with OCG corrections:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending the top 5 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard. This card is not affected by the effects of Effect Monsters your opponent controls. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon up to 2 monsters with a combined ATK equal to or less than the ATK of this card from either Graveyard." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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