Beans8190 Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 A few Dark Creatures i've been working on, some OCG corrections and ratings would be appreciated, thanks.info: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 DARK monsters on the field. Everytime this card attacks your opponent directly, you can discard 2 cards from your hand to Special Summon a card from the Graveyard for 2 turns. At the end of your opponents Standby Phase, that card is destroyed.Sephri:http://media.photobucket.com/image/dark%20warrior/elijahrocafella/Darkangelwarrior2-1.jpg?o=68Voril:http://media.photobucket.com/image/dark%20warrior/adadasas14/DarkWarrior.jpg?o=106Gadrielia:http://media.photobucket.com/image/dark%20warrior/h3ll_sp4wn/Dark.jpg?o=129Naril:http://media.photobucket.com/image/dark%20warrior/AngelOfShadows88/Dark%20Guys/Angels/f_FallenAngelm_956e50b.jpg?o=288 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Sorry, I don't do OCG. I do ideas. And Voril is the noteworthy one. I can see many possibilities to make it more professional. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beans8190 Posted February 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 thanks, any ideas on how Voril could be improved? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beans8190 Posted February 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Here's the next 8, more to come, again, any OCG suggestions/help and/or ratings would be most appreciated.Kaaekath info: This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 DARK Monsters from your hand and/or Graveyard. As long as this card is in play, you can choose the target of 1 of your opponents attacks per Battle Phase. If this card is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 DARK Monster from your Graveyard.Zodan info: "Gadrielia, Angel of the Darkness"+"Adrae, Swordsman in the Moonlight"Everytime this card attacks your opponent directly, raise the ATK and DEF of this card by 200. Once this card has increased by 1000, you can Tribute this card to Special Summon any DARK Monster from your Hand or Deck.Adrae:http://media.photobucket.com/image/dark%20swordsman/drizztnailo/darkswordsman.jpg?o=7Glacyn:http://media.photobucket.com/image/black%20knight/Marcariel/Fantasy/black-dragons-flight.jpg?o=9Cyllyra:http://media.photobucket.com/image/dark%20wizard/Razet/RP%20Profiles/elves221.jpg?o=1Kaaekath:http://media.photobucket.com/image/dark%20wizard/novamartin1/Dark/IntoTheDark.jpg?o=11TBSOS:http://media.photobucket.com/image/dark%20sword/DonNegron/death2.jpg?o=25KOTB:http://media.photobucket.com/image/dark%20wizard/DarkLinksPrincess83/nartdarkwizard.jpg?o=25AHLS:http://media.photobucket.com/image/black%20knight/EGSUPERMANEG/black_knight_shield_sword.jpg?o=124SOTS:http://media.photobucket.com/image/dark%20wizard/DarkShadow8/dark_wizard25b15d.jpg?o=10Zodan:http://media.photobucket.com/image/dark%20blade/gerardomyv/bgbb.jpg?o=25 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beans8190 Posted February 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Knowledge of the Bookkeeper is a great card.Overpowered, but I love the concept. A hero's last stand is overpowered as well. But I like what you were trying to do. Ooh and a little heads up. 24hrs until you can bump, ya? And try not for a double post. If it helps out, edit your last and PM the last person who posted in your thread, to reply and bump it for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Nice Pics.Nice Idea.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chainsaw20x6 Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 for a new member this is very good, infact good for anyone 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Several errors: opponents = opponent'sHand = handface down = face-down Not bad overall though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaos_demon Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 your first set used alot of very overused pics but im digging your second set alot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beans8190 Posted February 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 thanks guys, and ill remember about the bump thing, sorry, didnt know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CoFlow Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 :evil:Cool Cards but what do you think of My Flame cards:lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cardlord Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 :evil:Cool Cards but what do you think of My Flame cards:lol:dude post these! Why are you spoiling his thread.Not bad for a newbie. non offensively 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Not very bad for a newbie, 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Wow some of the best cards from a 1-star!CoFlow why the hell are you posting your own cards on his Thread (and for the record they are terrible cards)However back to the Dark monsters these have a lot of potential!I did spot a few OCG Errors though, they are cool cards!9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beans8190 Posted February 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Thank you very much guys, ill be sure to make some more of these =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schmackodude Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 pretty good card quite a few mistakes but not bad over all 7/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beans8190 Posted February 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 next 3, i think once i hit like 25, the set is done and ill start working on like a light monster set or something, idk yet, again, any OCG corrections/suggestions and/or ratings would be most appreciated =). Thanks again guys.Aygylth Info: This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Aygylth's Call". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more from the field or your hand. As long as this card is in play, you can Tribute a DARK monster from your side of the field to raise the ATK and DEF of this card by 500 until the end of your Battle Phase, you can use this 2 times per turn.Aygylth:http://media.photobucket.com/image/black%20dragon/Akatsuki_Wolke/Dragons/Black_Dragon_TNT_by_el_grimlock.jpg?o=38AC:http://media.photobucket.com/image/dragon%20summon/jdfangman/Dragon/Summondragon.jpg?o=5Mycer:http://media.photobucket.com/image/dragon%20summon/Sakura_Kawazumi/ff7ri.jpg?o=20Thanks again guys =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beans8190 Posted February 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 almost done, heres #17-21, once im at 25 im calling it done lol, that rhymed. anyway, again any ratings/OCG's are most welcome and thank you all to all who have already give their insight, i really appreciate it guys =)Cedia FOD:http://media.photobucket.com/image/dark%20fairy/iamthorn990/dark.jpg?o=40Asath:http://media.photobucket.com/image/metal%20dragon/Silver_Dragon90/DarkDragon-1.jpg?o=27Cedia TMP:http://media.photobucket.com/image/two%20headed%20dragon/666_Kamika_421_666/Demon02.jpg?o=16Mauth:http://media.photobucket.com/image/dragonrider/Black_Majik/Dragon007Dragonrider.jpg?o=31Rayeth:http://media.photobucket.com/image/demon/daninferno666/nfernal2.jpg?o=121again, thank you guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beans8190 Posted February 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 ok guys, this is it, #22-25. now im off to work on another set or something i guess lol. again any OCG's and ratings would be appreciated as always and thanks to Jack for a bit of help =)Derann:http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_L48Qazn0x-Y/RyAl78qmlzI/AAAAAAAAAJc/lzB3AOtv2hI/s400/Untitled-4_10_03.jpgCeras:http://www.wallpaperez.net/wallpaper/games/Medieval-2-Total-War-Kingdoms-642.jpgTWOTD:http://images.elfwood.com/art/s/p/spyrre/dragon_painting4.jpgDG:http://www.stanart.com/DragonEggs.JPG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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