blackclaw21 Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Well i'm making halo cards. Yes these are my first cards! :D And i want you to be serious with me do you think these cards are good suggestions etc stuff like that. Btw i made most of these within two days [1 hour a day] Well that's all the halo cards i've made so far. There may be a few more covenant ones. Way more flood. And the marines are after i begi nthe flood! Comments? Suggestions? etc :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Terrible ocg... And as for effects, some don't make sense. For example, drone swarm. You can have a possibility of 9 monsters on the field for that card... Also some monsters aren't worth the sacrifice. 1 sac for 1800 atk and 3 sac for 2650 atk? Drone's effect doesn't make sense due to ocg. If I am reading the prophet correctly, you can summon 2 monsters every turn? That's OP and will clog the field. Also the grunt w/ fuel rod says the card can't attack 2 turns in a row... But it can't attack 2 times in a row anyways. Certain cards like ghost and grunt with needler are underpowered... Can't attack for 5 turns? And banshees are OP, 1 sac with 2500 attack? It's been done before but only at the start of yugioh card history when the strategies were young... However... I do realize these are your first cards... Actually I wrote this before I knew. Sorry, I was a bit harsh. Anyways, congrats on first cards. For a new member, these are good. (I didn't know, sorry =/) Ocg is official card grammar. A card wouldn't normally say Kills you and then you need to wait 5 turns or whatever... to attack, it would say When this card attacks, your opponent skips his/her next 5 battle phases e.t.c.) I made a tutorial on this a long while back. Check it out by clicking my name link and going into my threads. Something like "I explain everything but life". I won't rate this as it's your first cards, but practise will make perfect ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blackclaw21 Posted February 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Thanks! I will improve on these! Anymore advice you can give me? I'm fine with harshness as long as it has a reason and yours is avery good one! This will help me improve mine :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cloco50 Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 These cards are bad you should have made the weapons equips and the pics better so do better next time. :( :arrow: :cry:[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 Bad OCG. Some pics need backround, Try to avoid making vanillas. Work on it... It'll get better. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Man0waR Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 thats Truth...not regret... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Envy14 Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 Why did you get Drone pics from the crappy version? Halo 3 is the only one with decent graphics. As for effects...horrible... 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpartanGio Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 Um why don't you just add effects please, normal cards are too easy to make and boring Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 lol, this makes me laugh, thanks for this.................. Enough said. Others explained. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superspence59 Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 I thought they looked pretty good. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kira_Fuma Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 They're not overly good or bad, just 5/10. Check out mine. AIDEN'S HALO CARDSI hope they inspire you to greater feats of cardmaking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightbringer37 Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 poor pics, take a look at my halo 3 deckForum name-Halo 3 Deck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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