maniamgood0 Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 I am a new member of this forum, and this is my first card. Rate out of 10? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 Well its not to good. I saw 14 OCG errors and thats well really bad. Get you OCG checked by Strawberry-nii-chan and this will be an ok card. 4.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maniamgood0 Posted February 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 What were the OCG errors? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 normal summoned=Normal Summonedspecial summoned=Special Summonedlight type=LIGHTgraveyard=Graveyardstandby phase=Standby Phasespecial summon=Special Summoneddeck=Deckdeck=Deck May bad 8. I can't count but that up there isn't completely right. SOme words need to be mixed up and stuff but I dont that stuff that well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maniamgood0 Posted February 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 This better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 Yes its better. For what I know its good but for people who know OCG by heart will say there are a few more OCG errors. I would tell you them but I really dont konw what they are. I just know its not 100% correct. Also its OP'ed OP=overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maniamgood0 Posted February 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 stop defence, fissure, dark hole, and many other cards can easily destroy it. Though I do agree, it is OP'ed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 the part I think it OP'ed is whole last sentnce. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can Special Summoned 1 level 6 or lower monster from your Deck. Maybe like make it Once per duel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 stop defence' date=' fissure, dark hole, and many other cards can easily destroy it. Though I do agree, it is OP'ed.[/quote'] Good that you admit your mistakes. And in the first sentence it should be, This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 Oh yeah forgot about that. Oops, sorry. Oh well, I think your catching on quickly to this card making thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonRoyale Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 3 LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard. Once per turn during your Standby Phase, by discarding 1 Level 6 or higher monster from your hand, Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower monster from your Deck." Added a balanced cost. Not bad. 7.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 Yeah there is OCG fixer. Very good DonRoyale. *Claps* Love you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 no made up types. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schmackodude Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 Overpowered. Too many stars. Pic doesn't look like a yugioh pic. doesn't have a proper type. 2/10, sorry i don't like this :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 pic is good, but far too powerful 2.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 Overpowered. Too many stars. Pic doesn't look like a yugioh pic. doesn't have a proper type. 2/10' date=' sorry i don't like this :([/quote'] It doesn't have to have Yu-Gi-Oh! related image. Its whatever you want it to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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