(Zero Chill Dragon) My Newest Card

[koramore]

 

Card Effect: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

During your Standby Phase you can discard 1 WATER monster from your hand to inflict 700 damage to your opponent. Once per turn, if you have more Life Points than your opponent you can add 1 Spell Card from your Graveyard to your hand. At the End Phase after this effect was activated, return this card to the Extra Deck.

 

 

Got real bored needed to make a Synchro monster, so rate and comment. Tell me of mistakes.

 

Image Credit: http://erwil.deviantart.com

[Guest JoshIcy]

Good for only 1 use.

But good for that use. Little high on the ATK though.

[koramore]

Yeah but after you use the effect he is returned to the Extra Deck you wont keep the card on the field for long

[bighope]

HMMmmmm...?!?...!?!...hmm...I like it but you could reword the last sentence to make it less confusing and it is a little over powered. Overall I give it an 8/10

[.Gideon.]

Once per turn you can discard 1 card from your hand to inflict 700 damage to your opponent. During your Standby Phase, if you have more Life Points than your opponent, you can add 1 Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. During your 3rd Standby Phase after this effect was activated, return this card to the Extra Deck.

 

* Fixed *

 

Now this card is way overpowered and broken, why?

because you can take out all spell cards from your deck and add them to your hand in one turn.

you must add "once per turn", and make this card return to the extra deck when you activate this effect, cuz it's a very powerful "broken" effect.

 

also you could use a better pic,

good card anyways, will get much better if u balanced it out.

[L33t Jenkins]

As DeViLQ8 said it is broken. You need to fix the ocg and make so you can only activate the second effect once per utrn. 6/10

[koramore]

OK i fixed it you can re rate or tell me if there are any more errors

thank you

[TrickyPooBoy]

Ok... 9/10.

[blackopps]

I give it a 7.5/10

[.Gideon.]

there is nothing called "Water-Type",

if you mean attribute then you must write it this way: discard 1 WATER monster"

 

 

It's still way too overpowered, adding a Spell card from the deck to your hand every turn,

also, this way the card will never return to the extra deck, because it says that this card returns to your extra deck after 3 turns from activating this effect. So each turn you activate this effect the "return to the extra deck" part will delay for 3 turns.

 

Just make it return to the extra deck once u activate this effect. " if u want to make it original ", although adding a spell card from the deck to your hand is something that has never been original, konami don't want this to happen. It is simply broken ^^

[koramore]

FIXED thank you

[.Gideon.]

yep now it looks great ^^

 

but u made another OCg error there,

 

you can write "monster", or "Monster Card"

monster card is wrong,

 

fix that and I'll give this a good 8.5/10

[koramore]

fixed thx again

[Dream]

good work 7.5/10

[Dark Archon]

nice card 8/10 :)