koramore Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 [img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/1717/153876ho9.jpg [/img] Card Effect: This card cannot be Special Summoned. Once per turn you can pay 600 Life Points to select 1 random Card in your opponent's hand and return it to the bottom of their Deck. If the Card was a Spell Card, inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Points and place 1 Thunder Counter on this card(max. 2). During your Standby Phase you can remove 2 Thunder Counters from this card to draw 1 card from your Deck. Rate and Comment. Tell me of mistakes. Image Credit: http://maxarkes.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 Too slow and underpowered =/... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted February 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 can you tell me how to fix it then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 This card cannot be Special Summoned. Once per turn you can pay 800 Life Points to select 1 random Card in your opponent's hand and return it to the bottom their Deck, if the Card was a Trap Card, inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Points and place 1 Thunder Counter on this card(max. 2). During your Standby Phase you can remove 2 Thunder Counters from this card to draw 1 card from your Deck. [align=center]I think thats the correct OCG fix.[/align] The effect seems slow and painful, due to a lack of trap cards being played, this card would almost be useless, i advise changing the Trap to Spell. and lowering Life Point Cost (being as the card isnt destroyed).The effect seems slow and painful, due to a lack of trap cards being played, this card would almost be useless, i advise changing the Trap to Spell. and lowering Life Point Cost (being as the card isnt destroyed). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D. Gray Man Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 too slow udnerpowerd ocg errors a next tiem try harder ^_^ 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 can you tell me how to fix it then? Not really... Concept is sorta weird to move around. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted February 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 ok thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 read my post ^, it has advice on how to fix, no point double posting ^.^read my post ^, it has advice on how to fix, no point double posting ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted February 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 thanks yujioooh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 [align=center]no problem, its just that Trap cards are becoming more and more unpopular, people usually run about 3 or 4 traps, that's, cylinder, mirror force, judgement etc. Spells are very common. And the Life Point cost of 800 seemed a lot to say you just move the card. :P glad to help.[/align] EDIT: congratz on level 2 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 read the card and the posts and i have to say, the card is good, and definitely getting better. good job. 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 It's ok but that text in the bottom right hand corner of the pic is annoying me, get rid of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom™ Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 This card cannot be Special Summoned. Once per turn you can pay 800 Life Points to select 1 random Card in your opponent's hand and return it to the bottom of their Deck.If the Card was a Trap Card' date=' inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Points and place 1 Thunder Counter on this card(max. 2). During your Standby Phase[b'],[/b] you can remove 2 Thunder Counters from this card to draw 1 card from your Deck.This is right, but I bolded the words he missed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted February 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 fixed the effect but i cant get that text in the corner out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 fixed the effect but i cant get that text in the corner out try this: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted February 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 thank you legendhiro how'd you do that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 i just cropped it down a little. and no problem, i'm glad to help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dream Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 nice work. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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