Saturn of Elemia Posted February 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 Nifty little ability, isn't it? =P Here's an updated OCG. This is gonna make the text on the card TINY. Lemme know if this is any better: This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 monsters on your field. This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned, it is placed in your Field Spell Zone and is not treated as a Monster Card while on the field. This card is unaffected by other card effects and cannot be destroyed except by its own effect. This card is not destroyed if a Field Spell is played. When you take Battle or Effect Damage, decrease the DEF of this card by the amount inflicted instead. If this card's DEF would be reduced to 0, destroy it. If you draw a (attribute) monster during your Draw Phase, you can reveal it to your opponent to (effect of Commander). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 Quite impressive of a pic, definately worth 9.5/10 right there. Also, you might want to make it so that it can't be normal summoned or it might be on the OP end a little Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Archon Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 awesome idea 9.99/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted February 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 Quite impressive of a pic' date=' definately worth 9.5/10 right there. Also, you might want to make it so that it can't be normal summoned or it might be on the OP end a little[/quote'] The first line of text "This card can only be Special Summoned by" is on cards like "Gigantes" and "Garuda the Wind Spirit". Those cannot be Normal Summoned; they have to be Special Summoned by their effects. However, they can be Special Summoned from elsewhere if you met the original condition first. I decided to make the Commanders follow the same concept so that they aren't a one-time deal. They can only be Special Summoned from your hand or RFG; the would be too broken if they could be revived from the Graveyard. Another reason why I made it have that Special Summon conditon is that you can use Scapegoats to get out a Commander, so you can get more bang-for-your-buck with a Scapegoat. Thanks for your comment. I hope this helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 oh ok, sorry I did miss that part. In that case the card looks perfectly balanced, I'll give it a 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 the new version of the effect is definitely better. awesome, just as before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 i like this idea...you should add support spells/traps to help flesh out the subtype. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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