blazejecar Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 this is my set of "demon" cards.Please rate and comment: lore:this card cannot be special summoned.the atk of this card becomes the combined def of the 2 monsters used to summon this card.Destroy this card if there are no dragon type monsters on your side of the field.Once per turn you can declare the type of the card at the bottom of your opponents deck(spell,trap or monster).Your opponent then reveales the card.If you guessed correctly, regain 1000 life points.If not, take 1500 points of damage.After this effect is activated, your opponent then adds the card to his/her hand and then schuffles his/her deck. more in my next post, where i present the main card of the set.heres part 2: and now the main card of the set:lore:1 tuner monster with demon in its card name+3 or more non tuner monstersThis card cannot be special summoned except by synchro summon.Once per turn you can pay 500 life points to special summon a monster with demon in its card name from your graveyard to your side of the field.When this card is destroyed, you can special summon one synchro monster from your extra deck ignoring the summoning conditions except komundon, the demon overking.This card cannot attack an attack position monster and it cannot attack your opponent directly. thats it!please rate and comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazejecar Posted February 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 come on people, what do you think??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FateTheSeer Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 i think they are cool 8/10 im not that good with ocg so if there were erors im not the best person to correct them sorry =^_^= Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazejecar Posted February 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 and any1 else?What do u think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 Well i cann'ot fix ocg for you because there not posted so far i have to vote 7/10 because i cannot see the effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazejecar Posted February 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 which one dont you see?Tell me and i will post them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 Superancient Sea DemonAnd TokohasoAlso the One Between them Two Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazejecar Posted February 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 ok here they are:superancient sea demon:1 tuner monster+1 or more non tuner monstersThis card cannot be special summoned except by synchro summon.Any damage inflicted to your life points is doubled.This card can attack all monsters on your opponents side of the field once each but without damage calculation.Then inflict damage to your opponents life points equal to the number of monsters destroyed by this card x1000 points.This card is the only one that can attack douring your battle phase. tokohasho the demon lord:2 tuner monsters+2 or more non tuner monstersThis card cannot be special summoned except by synchro summon.When this card attacks, decrease all monsters on your opponents side of the fields atk and def to 0.When this card is destroyed, you can pay 500 life points to special summon one lvl4 or lower monster with demon in its card name from your deck to your side of the field. tiosaku, the metal demon:1 tuner monster+1 or more non tuner monstersWhen this card is summoned inflict damage to your opponents life points equal to the number of monsters used to synchro summon this card x300 points.When this card is attacked, destroy it after damage calculation.If this card is targeted by an effect of a trap card, you can pay 1000 life points to negate the effect and draw a card from your deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 Ocg Seems to be in order sooooo, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 Nice cards, but plz capitalize names and types 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazejecar Posted February 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 thx. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 DUDE ........... CAPITALIZE!!!You must capitalize the first letter in each major word in the name of a card!You must also Capitalize Types such as Fiend or Beast!You must also Capitalize certain words in the Card Lore such as;-Life Points-Synchro Summoned-Trap CardBasically those important to the Yu-Gi-Oh TCG MUST be Capitalized!___________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Also Vanillas are very boring people really don't like them! Would you like me to Fix all the card's OCG for you for a few points or a Rep? :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazejecar Posted February 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 im not making cards to make them real, i make them for fun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 You need to capitalize the first letter in every main word in the name.Please look at the OCG thread to improve your OCG. But good effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazejecar Posted February 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 ok so what about any1 else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazejecar Posted February 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 well??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schultzy89 Posted February 19, 2009 Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 i like the pictures, and i have a.d.d. so i didnt really read all of them so no ocg rating but 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazejecar Posted February 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted February 19, 2009 Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 OCG needs a lot of work. Pics are okay, too many pics from anime. Effects are okay. Some might be OP or UP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dream Posted February 19, 2009 Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 5/10 sorry they aren't too good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted February 19, 2009 Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 Many OCG errorz and CAPITALIZING errorz, plus some bad pics = 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kenny Bohner Posted February 19, 2009 Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 Well, the concepts were good, but obvious errors detract from the value. Some of the descriptions/effects were misspelled, with elementary grammar. Some of the graphics flat suck, too. 4/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoshiman™ Posted February 19, 2009 Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 mods, no img credit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted February 19, 2009 Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 mods' date=' no img credit[/quote'] Thankyou Captain Obvious. Also, Wrong Section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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