jasper797 Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 dam that took long but hey ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hamcha Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 they go in the pop culture section Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jasper797 Posted February 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 they go in the pop culture sectiono ok thnx :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonRoyale Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.htmlhttp://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.htmlhttp://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.htmlhttp://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.htmlhttp://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.html PLEASE. GO HERE. NOW. I want to cry, looking at these. These cards are written with more OCG errors than SDY/K Ultimate Offering and SDK Mysterious Puppeteer put together. Half these cards are also horribly redundant. Every single equip card made here is vastly outdone by the various equips from MRL (Axe of Despair, Black Pendant, etc.), making most of your equips useless. The ranks of the ninja don't count as their own maintypes. They're all Warriors, or Beast in the case of Akamaru. (Beast-Warrior can apply for Kiba, I suppose.) Also, you have to specify team combinations and ninja from specific villages. Not everyone watches Naruto, therefore, you can't assume everyone knows which ninja are from which village and therefore get the bonuses from your Field cards. The effects are uninventive and frankly, quite boring. I would have liked to see certain special abilities explored more thoroughly. There is no Quick-Play Trap Card, also. And your Sharingan adaptation is also extremely unbalanced. There is no cost; not even a condition. Anyone smart would pop three of these into any deck; at least specify that Kakashi or Sasuke or anyone else with the Sharingan (as someone who quit the series some time ago, I'm not up on it. Sorry, I refuse to be a Narutard. ._.) should exist on the field for it to work. You get an A for effort. You covered everything that really should have been covered (I do notice a lack of Orochimaru, though...plus, Naruto's underpowered, and where is the Nine-Tailed Fox? :(), but you can cover them much better. I'm sure there are many people who have done better on this site. Check the Pop Culture section. This belongs there anyway. There, you can find people who have done this idea better and learn how to adapt new and more dynamic special abilities into your Naruto-flavored cards. For now, I have to rate this a 2/10. Just because this has been done many times before, and often times, it was done better. Sorry. You're new, though; you'll learn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Archon Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 yea just about everything has been said..... so 1/10... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jasper797 Posted February 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.htmlhttp://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.htmlhttp://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.htmlhttp://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.htmlhttp://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.html PLEASE. GO HERE. NOW. I want to cry' date=' looking at these. These cards are written with more OCG errors than SDY/K Ultimate Offering and SDK Mysterious Puppeteer put together. Half these cards are also horribly redundant. Every single equip card made here is vastly outdone by the various equips from MRL (Axe of Despair, Black Pendant, etc.), making most of your equips useless. The ranks of the ninja don't count as their own maintypes. They're all Warriors, or Beast in the case of Akamaru. (Beast-Warrior can apply for Kiba, I suppose.) Also, you have to specify team combinations and ninja from specific villages. Not everyone watches Naruto, therefore, you can't assume everyone knows which ninja are from which village and therefore get the bonuses from your Field cards. The effects are uninventive and frankly, quite boring. I would have liked to see certain special abilities explored more thoroughly. There is no Quick-Play Trap Card, also. And your Sharingan adaptation is also extremely unbalanced. There is no cost; not even a condition. Anyone smart would pop three of these into any deck; at least specify that Kakashi or Sasuke or anyone else with the Sharingan (as someone who quit the series some time ago, I'm not up on it. Sorry, I refuse to be a Narutard. ._.) should exist on the field for it to work. You get an A for effort. You covered everything that really should have been covered (I do notice a lack of Orochimaru, though...plus, Naruto's underpowered, and where is the Nine-Tailed Fox? :(), but you can cover them much better. I'm sure there are many people who have done better on this site. Check the Pop Culture section. This belongs there anyway. There, you can find people who have done this idea better and learn how to adapt new and more dynamic special abilities into your Naruto-flavored cards. For now, I have to rate this a 2/10. Just because this has been done many times before, and often times, it was done better. Sorry. You're new, though; you'll learn.[/quote'] [ i hope its a little better now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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