Ezio Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 YAY I'M A 3-STAR NOW!Nice card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 Some errors still. Its not Ritual Summon Card. Its Ritual Spell Card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kidkidpie Posted February 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 correct me if i have any ocg errors cuz i mightpic cred for Fleshie is google images Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 Once per turn, destroy 1 face-up Beast or Warrior-Type monster on the field. If you use this effect this card cannot attack this turn. I think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kidkidpie Posted February 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 ok thanks ill fix it after im sone with my current oneimg cred ~ali-tunic fixed YAY! fixed! LA FIXA! ITS-A FIXXA! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 You still didn't fx it.Copy my effect into the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kidkidpie Posted February 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 sorry i kinda just skimmed and fixed what i could see is this right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 ^Yes, Now Thats Right. If your unsure of a card, just PM me and I'll fix what I can K?;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kidkidpie Posted February 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 not sure about ocg here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ELPatoloco21 Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 U SHOULD MAKE THE TRAP CARD A CONTINOUS TRAP AND THE DRAGON UM I GUESS 8 STARS WOULD BE AN IMPROVMENT BUT ITS ALL ON HOW U LIKE THE CARDS VANILLAS OLD SCHOOL YU-GI-OH!!!LOVED THE OLD TIMES BUT THE NEW ARE GREAT 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kidkidpie Posted February 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 U SHOULD MAKE THE TRAP CARD A CONTINOUS TRAP AND THE DRAGON UM I GUESS 8 STARS WOULD BE AN IMPROVMENT BUT ITS ALL ON HOW U LIKE THE CARDS VANILLAS OLD SCHOOL YU-GI-OH!!!LOVED THE OLD TIMES BUT THE NEW ARE GREAT 2 dude i dont have any traps. and i know vanillas are old but that was on of my firsts and i like how it is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 The frst part s alrght. I think the Secod part should be.Once ths card attacks switch this card to defense positon.I THINKAlso, some people dont like when you post the cards the way you're posting them. Click the Edit button on the first post, then clck Full Edit and put you're cards there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 [align=center]advice, can you try keeping all your cards in 1 post, its easier to see them all and saves alot of time. if you notice your post there is a little EDIT button to the bottom right. copy and paste your new codes into that.[/align] ratings: You have alot of OCG errors, since when have you seen 'BEAST or WARRIOR' on a card, and 'this card cannot be defeated'? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kidkidpie Posted February 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 i have plenty of cards that cannot be defeated by battle. Should Beast and Warrior-type be all caps? right now im working a series of card based on zodiacs and i have only 2 left. ill post em here when im done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 Wow you've really advanced since I last saw you!Doing very well!Cards are looking good - Flesh Eating Spider's my fav :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kidkidpie Posted February 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 ty almost done with new set of zodiacs. im glad to see a noob not being insulted and bullied for having suckish workHEY IM TWO STAR NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH YEAH LEVEL TWO BABY! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 You don't suck too much (Trust me, Ive seen may bad cards). I was gonna make Zodiac Cards :(. For the cards that I helped Fix I shall give you an ......8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kidkidpie Posted February 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 well thank you! i like your gyroman 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 Lol, so time to get back to topic. As some people said, posting you're cards on the first page would be way better then posting them over and over Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kidkidpie Posted February 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 and i fixed this one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 [align=center]These cards really are very bad, i don't see any improvement, read the OCG thread please. at least i tell the truth unlike some other people. BEAST/ WARRIOR type = Beast/Warrior-Type cannot be defeated = cannot be destroyed by battle.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 First before working on your OCG, learn about everything else........... Balancing your cards and effect structure then OCG will help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 [align=center]Your OCG is terrible, you cannot spell (ths, dementionional = this, dimentional) ...also you have a really bad choice of images and your cards effectsare lame.[/align] thanks for the backup X31 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 Well I guess we said everything. Your welcome yugioooh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kidkidpie Posted February 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 dude i have a card right here that says "...cannot be defeated by battle."! you are right about the beast warrior thing.ok i will look over my ocg more you are right but im a noob so i know i suck you gotta cut me some slack. ill fix my ocg on flesh eating spider and dementional wolf. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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