Shocky1000 Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 I want to know what people think so that way I can improve next time I create cards. These are Bee cards. They insects that have effects that help to swarm your opponent. All images were taken from google.com Sorry messed up on this one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Keeper Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 The cards and the OCG are ok, but the images are...bad. The effects are very good, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysterium Tremendum Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 I'm gonna have to agree with Soul Keeper. For starters, two can be 2 and, although some people use "from battle" I still think that "as a result of battle" still sounds better... just a suggestion. Normal Summoned should be capitalized Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kidkidpie Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 to small. pictures too cartoony many ocg errors 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Çå®∂îñål Posted February 22, 2009 Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 Not bad 6/10 pictures are way to animated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maali Posted February 22, 2009 Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 good idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkfire27131 Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Not bad, love the effectspictures are unique, but try to get more realistic ones next timekeep trying! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Am I the first experienced member to rate this? OK, well:1) Please find pics with backgrounds and good quality (not fuzzy or black and white)2) OCG is bad3) Some cards are either OP'd or UP'd 5/10 for attempt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Runer5h Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Not horrible. It's a good idea, but let me point out some of the more glaring errors:1: Beekeeper is already a Bee monster, so no need to put that in the effect. Just look at the most unexpected Vehicroid, Elemental Hero Necroid Shaman!2: Bee Princess and Queen Bee are not true nomis. In my short time here, this is one mistake I've seen a lot - people restrict the monster from being Normal Summoned, but what about being Set? Still, good effort! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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