Turnipman Posted February 20, 2009 Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 Demon DogFlip: Remove from play this card and 1 dark monster in your graveyard to special summon a level 4 or lower dark monater from your hand. Dimensional Dragon1 Dark Turner + 1 or more non-tuner monstersWhen this card is Synchro summoned remove from play all non-dark monsters on your side of the field. Once per turn remove from 1 dark monster in your graveyard, and on your next standby phase special summon that monster in attack position, any card special summoned by this cards effect cant attack during the turn it was summoned. Early Learning NurseyAny level 2 or lower monster that is removed from play is special summoned during your next standby phase, If this card is destroyed by a card effect any face up level 2 or lower monsters are returned to the owners deck. Level BusterOnce per turn decrease the level of this monster by by any amount to increase the level of another monster on your side of the field (except Level Buster) by the same amount. Loyal SubjectIf this card is returned to your hand by the effect of a monster card special summon as many Loyal Subject's from deck to the field in defence position. NegotiationActivate this card when your opponent destroys one of your monsters and sends it to the graveyard with the effect of a spell or trap card special summon the destroyed monster in defence position, then your opponent can draw a card. The Dark GodIf this card is in your hand and your opponent removes from play one of your dark monsters in the graveyard, you can special summon this card from your hand. If this card destroys a monster by battle select one dark monster that has been removed from play with lower ATK points than the destroyed monster and return it to the graveyard. :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D If you like my cards plz post:Dor if you want give me advice on how to improve plz post:Dor if you dont like them plz post:DCan u plz leave a mark out of 10:DAND can u remember to be nice these are my first ever cards of hopefully many more!!!:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deloge Posted February 20, 2009 Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 Not bad. But those Nursery, Negotiation, and Loyal Subject looks like a children card here. Fix some OCG, like Attributes (DARK with all capitals), effects, and grammars, kay? Its not a bad cards for beginners, me will rate 8/10. Keep making cards dude! p.s. : this is YGO forum. it is obvious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted February 20, 2009 Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 Pictures should look like computer graphics and with a background.OCG needs fixing.Other than that, they alright.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turnipman Posted February 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 thanks i will tend to those problems as soon as possible and thanks for the good marks and comments and i will continue to make cards and let u know when i do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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