Exodia The Dark Lord

[DarkHorus16]

(I know the pic is Exodia Necross)

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Effect: This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Removing From Play "Exodia The Forbidden One", "Left Arm Of The Forbidden One", "Right Arm Of The Forbidden One", "Left Leg Of The Forbidden One" and "Right Leg Of The Forbidden One" from your Graveyard. Once per turn you can Remove From Play 1 DARK attribute monster in your Graveyard to return 1 of the cards mentioned above to your Graveyard. When the cards mentioned above have been returned to the Graveyard by this cards effect, you win the duel. This card gains 500 ATK and DEF for every DARK attribute monster in your Graveyard. Once per turn you can Remove From Play 1 DARK attribute monster in your Graveyard to prevent this cards destruction.[/align]

[starwebs1]

This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play "Exodia The Forbidden One", "Left Arm Of The Forbidden One", "Right Arm Of The Forbidden One", "Left Leg Of The Forbidden One" and "Right Leg Of The Forbidden One" from your Graveyard. Once per turn you can remove from play 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard to return 1 of the cards you removed from play to your Graveyard. When the cards mentioned above have been returned to your Graveyard by this card's effect, you win the duel. This card gains 500 ATK and DEF for every DARK monster in your Graveyard. Once per turn, if this card is selected as an attack target, you can remove from play 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard to prevent this card from being destroyed.

 

 

 

Overpowered Exodia...

[Turnipman]

its ok

good idea

but you need to get a better pic

and they are a bit overpowered

and sort out the order of the writing and replace 'cards metioned above' with something more appropriate and realistic

 

keep it up

they'll turn out ok in the end

 

5/10

[A●O●J]

We don't like it when you use real card images. Im pretty sure you could have easily found a good exodia render or even another custom exodia variant picture on Deviant Art or Photobucket considering how popular exodia is.

 

Not only that but his effect is basically just a modified Exodius The Ultimate Forbidden Lord. Think of a better effect and a more original name.

 

Your ocg is excellent for a new member. The only error I spotted was that "cards mentioned" should be "The above cards".

 

Overall: 7.5/10

 

(Change the effect a little to be different from Exodius and find a different picture and this should be a good card.)

[andre007]

i could try 2 get u a good pic of a 'dark' exodia for free

[DarkHorus16]

[align=center]Thanks for the tips. Here's the new card (sorry pic isn't very good it was the best I could find).

 

 

Effect: This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Removing From Play 5 DARK attribute monsters with different names in your Graveyard. Once per turn you can pay 1000 Life Points to send up to 4 DARK attribute monsters in your deck to the Graveyard. During your Main Phase you can Remove From Play DARK attribute monsters in your Graveyard to add 1 monster with "The Forbidden One" in it's name (except "Raspodias, Darkness Of The Forbidden One") whose level is equal to the number of cards removed from your deck to your hand. If 3 or more DARK attribute monsters exist in your Graveyard, this card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle.[/align]

 

How's that?

[andre007]

i will pm 1 2 u

[DarkHorus16]

i could try 2 get u a good pic of a 'dark' exodia for free

 

That would be helpful' date=' thanks :)[hr']

i will pm 1 2 u

 

For some reason my computer won't let me view the image :x