Little Spazz Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 Here a few more cards please tell me any ocg errors that i can fixplease rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 I lol'd. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Little Spazz Posted February 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 I lol'd. 4/10 ok i got 4/10 i know that is bad...so wat can i fix??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 Your OCG and Grammar for a start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Zhang Cao-Sun Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 Here is a rewrite for "Master Chief". As long as "Arbiter" is on your field, this card gain 200 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 OCG errorsDon't capitalize "I lost my gun""Arbiter" and "Jackal" need better pictures"Master Chief" and "Arbiter"s ATK are overpowered for a Level 5. Give them stats between 1900 and 2300. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Little Spazz Posted February 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 alright i am starting to fix the cards from the things you guys r saying so ty for telling me wat to fixOCG errorsDon't capitalize "I lost my gun""Arbiter" and "Jackal" need better pictures"Master Chief" and "Arbiter"s ATK are overpowered for a Level 5. Give them stats between 1900 and 2300. 3/10 alright i fixed wat you said except for the ocg errors i have not looked for them yetnow i will start trying to fix the ocg errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tom_legend Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 marine is way overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightbringer37 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Ok... as an avid Halo fan I HAVE to point this pout, your first card is just a blue armored elite, NOT the ARBITER!Other than that 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 [align=center]Okay, as a non-Halo fan, i feel compelled to give a rating :? (lolwut). Pro's-I can, despite the bad OCG and grammar, understand the effects.-No Normal monsters, thats impressive, all have an effect, however short.-Cards structured round a theme, no random mess' :) Con's-OCG and grammar errors, very bad when making a card.-images, even though they are clear, they are not 'card worthy', i.e. they dont look like card art material.-cards are slightly overpowered, especially 'Marine'. remember to balance your cards fairly, you wouldnt like to play against these cards in somebody elses deck would you. I can see that the negatives over balance the positives, leading me to the conclusion that these cards need work and, however average they are, still are quite bad, but a good shot...kinda.[/align] [align=center]Tipsdeck = Deckhand = handField = fieldspell/ trap = Spell/ Trapgain = increasedeal = inflictFLIP = flipped/ Flip Summoned.normal/ special summon = Normal/ Special Summon[/align]Here is a rewrite for "Master Chief". As long as "Arbiter" is on your field' date=' this card gain 200 ATK.[/quote'] As long as you control 1 "Abriter", increase this cards ATK by 200. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 "I Lost My Gun" is probably not the best title for that card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Little Spazz Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 alright i forgot i had posted these and i just found this :( opps... i will start working on these asap but i not on computer too much... the weather is awsome hereOk... as an avid Halo fan I HAVE to point this pout' date=' your first card is just a blue armored elite, NOT the ARBITER!Other than that 5/10[/quote'] yes i agree and i know that is just an elite not the actual Arbiter but i could not find a good picture that WAS NOT BLURRY of the arbiter but as soon as i find one i will fix it untill then i am very sry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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