Kira_Fuma Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 Hello! These are some cards I made, all pics are from Google Images. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
World Eater Gig Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Okay, good pics, but some OCG errors.First, monster is always capitalized (Monster).Next, and I will use the effect of Yukimura as an example, it is "This Monster gains 500 ATK and DEF if you control either "Kanatsugu Naoe or Tadakatsu Honda."Also, Kanatsugu's effect is wrong. It refers to himself.Finally, you've made a mistake with the effects of Kanatsugu, Tadakatsu and Yukimura. Tadakatsu Honda's effect should belong to Mitsunari Ishida, and Kanatsugu or Yukimura should gain ATK and DEF for Mitsunari Ishida being on the field. From my experience in the game (which is quite a bit, 50+ hours) Yukimura is only in the same force as Tadakatsu in two battles, and he only talks to him once or twice in the entire game. He talks to Mitsunari and Kanatsugu a lot more (honestly, I just believe you've mixed Tadakatsu and Mitsunari up. If you are insistent on having Tadakatsu gain ATK and DEF from another Monster being present, then create an Ina Card (his daughter) or change his effect to refer to Ieyasu).Finally, please god change Hanzo's effect. It's a good effect, and I can see it happening, but with his ATK and the ease of raising ATK points in this game, it could easily turn into a one turn kill, and, thanks to the trap immunity, its bloody hard to stop. Perhaps something like Kataro's effect, only on face-up Monsters?Anyway, good job, 9/10. Hope to see more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kira_Fuma Posted February 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
World Eater Gig Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 Awesome. That just looks so much better now.Good job, I'd like to see more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Zhang Cao-Sun Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 The fact that all these cards are immune to Traps is a bit ridiculs, but all the other effects are good. Note: You seemed to use Yukimura's SW1 and all the other are SW2. Any reason behind that? Rating: Good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rodri666 Posted February 25, 2009 Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 Bad OCG in your first card, cool pics. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kira_Fuma Posted February 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 The way I choose my pics doesn't matter which they are in, it just depends on if they are nice pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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