Bottomless Lava Swimmer ... ! , maybe a new subtype ..

[.Gideon.]

hey there everyone,

 

it has been a long time since I made a card,

so I came up with a new card just not to lose this hobby ! ^^

 

I'm thinkin of making a new subtype " the monsters must be set face-down in the spell & trap card zone, after destruction they go face-up to the opponent's spell & trap card zone, then their effect activate"

 

didn't decide what's the subtype is yet so I want to hear suggestions from you all,

 

this is the card: ( there is wording in the bottom left, I know ):

 

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You can Set this card face-down in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Trap Card. If this face-down card in your Spell & Trap Card Zone is destroyed by your opponent's card effect, place it face-up in your opponent's Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Trap Card. As long as this card remains face-up in your opponent's Spell & Trap Card Zone, inflict 800 damage to your opponent each time he/she Summons a monster. If this face-up card in your opponent's Spell & Trap Card Zone is destroyed, Special Summon it to your field. This card can attack your opponent directly.[/align]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I do not own this image

IMG credits : my pc > Deviantart > Unkown

 

please rate & comment, your ideas & suggestions are well appreciated ! ^_^

[Lord Smeagle]

I like him. He looks hungry...

 

Anyway, I gives 8.5/10.

[Mechmaster Z]

That is really cool looking, and it has an awesome effect. I give 9.5 out of ten (thats not possible so i will rate 5/5) anyway a good subtype name could be where it says [PYRO/TRAP] yes no or maybe?

[ragnarok1945]

"contenuous" should be spelled "continuous".

[.Gideon.]

"contenuous" should be spelled "continuous".

 

* Slaps face *, how the hell did I do that ! O.o

 

 

 

Thanx 4 ur comments ppl

more ! ^^

[JG.]

Apart from the kinda missing image cred, this card is fine! But there are some OCG errors, I'll fix them for you:

 

You can Set this card face-down in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Trap Card. If this face-down card in your Spell & Trap Card Zone is destroyed by your opponent's card effect, place it face-up in your opponent's Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Trap Card. As long as this card remains face-up in your opponent's Spell & Trap Card Zone, inflict 800 damage to your opponent each time he/she Summons a monster. If this face-up card in your opponent's Spell & Trap Card Zone is destroyed, Special Summon it to your field. This card can attack your opponent directly.

 

The first is just a minor error, the last isn't needed, you only have to say if it can't attack directly.

[megaraptor]

nice a monster "Toll" card, original 9.8/10

[.Gideon.]

Apart from the kinda missing image cred' date=' this card is fine! But there are some OCG errors, I'll fix them for you:

 

You can Set this card face-down in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Trap Card. If this face-down card in your Spell & Trap Card Zone is destroyed by your opponent's card effect, place it face-up in your opponent's Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Trap Card. As long as this card remains face-up in your opponent's Spell & Trap Card Zone, inflict 800 damage to your opponent each time he/she Summon[b']s[/b] a monster. If this face-up card in your opponent's Spell & Trap Card Zone is destroyed, Special Summon it to your field. This card can attack your opponent directly.

 

The first is just a minor error, the last isn't needed, you only have to say if it can't attack directly.

 

and how the hell did I missed the "s" >.>,

the last part is needed , it means this card can attack directly even if the opponent has monsters on his field , ^^

 

Thanx 4 ur replies guys

more! ^^

[.Gideon.]

Bump. =/

[FrooTcake]

I Like it. I think you should make moe

9/10

[Luna Lovegood]

Border = Epic fail.

 

Other then that, great idea. I like it a lot.

[Dragon_22]

LOVE THIS CARD!!! it is very original 20/10

[.Gideon.]

thank u all 4 ur comments

, glad that u like it

[Jace Beleren]

good idea 8.7/10

how bout call the type of this cards:

Shadows or Shadow Beasts

[.Gideon.]

No. Fail

thanx 4 the comment

[~ P O L A R I S ~]

Here's some OCG! =)

 

You can Set this card face-down in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Trap Card. If this face-down card in your Spell & Trap Card Zone is destroyed by your opponent's card effect, place it face-up in your opponent's Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Trap Card. While this card is a Continuous Trap Card, inflict 800 damage to the controller of this card each time they Summon a monster. If this face-up card is destroyed while it is a Continuous Trap Card, Special Summon it to the owner's side of the field. This card can attack your opponent directly.

 

I like it. ;) Kinda like a Crystal Beast but more complex and fiery.

 

As for the Subtype, "Invert" sounds like it would match the concept.

[Spiff!]

Nice idea,or "Switcher"

[Kotaro]

Well ocg has been said

the name describes the image as in that it suits the image

 

Quiet good image with a pretty sweet and enoying effect.

 

Although it might be considered as underpowered in particular circumstances.

 

Anyways, i will rate it as 8.7/10

[Skyson]

It's like the people have never heard of Toy Magician for the first part of the effect.

 

Transferring over to the opponent's field is interesting though, and 800 damage per Summon is pretty nasty.

 

Then they/you intentionally get rid of it and you have a free direct attacker.

 

This punishes Spell & Trap Destruction pretty nicely. I like the idea, and for some reason 800 damage per Summon doesn't seem too extreme here.

 

Good deal.

 

8/10.

[Luna Lovegood]

Oh, and not a sub-type, how about a Archetype.

[Dragon™]

[align=center]]No, epic fail subtypes.

Beastial, thats it. The subtype is Beastial.

Anyways, OCG has been pointed out by other members.

No, pic is epic fail since theres a black border and text.

Seriously, to remove text if It's on the bottom, just simple go to paint and lower the image space.

If theres text anywhere else like beside a monster, simple oom to 800 and try to copy and paste some parts that look similar.

To remove borders, just copy the whole image except the border and paist it on paint.

Lower the image space so it fits, and you're done.

Just some quick tips.

Anyways, I like the idea of it. The name is epic.

Total Rating,

7/6/10.00[/align]

[.Gideon.]

Here's some OCG! =)

 

You can Set this card face-down in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Trap Card. If this face-down card in your Spell & Trap Card Zone is destroyed by your opponent's card effect' date=' place it face-up in your opponent's Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Trap Card. While this card is a Continuous Trap Card, inflict 800 damage to the controller of this card each time they Summon a monster. If this face-up card is destroyed while it is a Continuous Trap Card, Special Summon it to the owner's side of the field. This card can attack your opponent directly.

 

I like it. ;) Kinda like a Crystal Beast but more complex and fiery.

 

As for the Subtype, "Invert" sounds like it would match the concept.

[/quote']

 

Oh yeah forgot about the owner and the controller thingy >_<"

thanx for the fixin' ! ^^

 

invert, hmmm, maybe, but let's hear more ideas ;)

 

Nice idea' date='or "Switcher"

[/quote']

 

NO ! ^^

 

Well ocg has been said

the name describes the image as in that it suits the image

 

Quiet good image with a pretty sweet and enoying effect.

 

Although it might be considered as underpowered in particular circumstances.

 

Anyways' date=' i will rate it as 8.7/10

[/quote']

 

the main goal of this "subtype" is to counter those annoying spell & trap destrucion, and the "destroy 1 card on the field" effects,

i'm thinkin of more effects that will make this subtype alittle pain in the @$$ ^^

 

It's like the people have never heard of Toy Magician for the first part of the effect.

 

Transferring over to the opponent's field is interesting though' date=' and 800 damage per Summon is pretty nasty.

 

Then they/you intentionally get rid of it and you have a free direct attacker.

 

[b']This punishes Spell & Trap Destruction pretty nicely[/b]. I like the idea, and for some reason 800 damage per Summon doesn't seem too extreme here.

 

Good deal.

 

8/10.

 

now THAT's what i was talkin' about ^^

 

Oh' date=' and not a sub-type, how about a Archetype.

[/quote']

 

I prefer subtype, cuz they all gonna work the same way, "Set in S&T Zone, when destroyed goes face-up in the opponent's S&T Zone, then their effect activates"

 

 

Thanx 4ur comments & rating guys, really appreciated ^_^

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[align=center]]No' date=' epic fail subtypes.

Beastial, thats it. The subtype is Beastial.

Anyways, OCG has been pointed out by other members.

No, pic is epic fail since theres a black border and text.

Seriously, to remove text if It's on the bottom, just simple go to paint and lower the image space.

If theres text anywhere else like beside a monster, simple oom to 800 and try to copy and paste some parts that look similar.

To remove borders, just copy the whole image except the border and paist it on paint.

Lower the image space so it fits, and you're done.

Just some quick tips.

Anyways, I like the idea of it. The name is epic.

[u']Total Rating,

7/6/10.00[/u][/align]

 

I know, i can remove the text and border but I'm too lazy to do it ^^

i just wanted some ideas and opinions on this card,

 

thanx 4 ur comment dude ;)

[Luna Lovegood]

But look at it the Crystal Beast way, I mean, their effect is just too, er, general.

[Runer5h]

Well, what sucks is having too many cards in your S&T Zone so that you can't use more... what would suck even more is if your opponent filled it up for you! I sort of like the idea of it being a Bottom Dweller - in my mind, it starts out on the bottom of the sea. Then it moves up through the water to finally emerge in all it's repulsive glory! Great concept.

[.Gideon.]

But look at it the Crystal Beast way' date=' I mean, their effect is just too, er, general.

[/quote']

 

Yeah I always wondered why the hell didn't they make the damned crystal beasts a new subtype .. i mean, they SHOULD be a new subtype..

 

Well' date=' what sucks is having too many cards in your S&T Zone so that you can't use more... what would suck even more is if your opponent filled it up for you! I sort of like the idea of it being a Bottom Dweller - in my mind, it starts out on the bottom of the sea. Then it moves up through the water to finally emerge in all it's repulsive glory! Great concept.

[/quote']

 

Thanx ! ^_^