BANZAI!!!! Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 I was bored, so I decided to make my own versions of the legendary dragons and their fusions from the Yu-Gi-Oh! anime's atlantis arc. I finished the anime fusions, and made a few of my own based on cards that I like. My goal here is to make these crads completely playable and not OP'ed. Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. Please rate and comment. Critias: Lore: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play three Critias cards in your graveyard and by paying 4000 Life Points. As long as this card is face up on the field, its name is treated as "Critias Domain". Once per turn, you can add one Trap Card from your deck to your hand. Lore: "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" + "Tyrant Burst Dragon"This card can only be Synchro Summoned from your Extra Deck by sending the above cards from your field or hand to the graveyard. This card's Synchro Summoning cannot be negated. This card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each. Lore:The Activation of this card cannot be negated. This card cannot be destroyed except by the effect of a Trap Card. Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to add one trap card from your deck to your hand. If you do, send the selected trap card to the graveyard during the end phase. Lore: This card can only be Summoned while you control a face up "Critias Domain". This card can only be special summoned from your deck by removing from play 1 "Deck Devastation Virus" from your side of the field, or hand. Once per turn, you can destroy all of your opponents monsters on the field, and in their hand, with 1500 or more ATK. You can only use this effect once per duel. Lore: This card can only be Summoned while you control a face up "Critias Domain". You can Special Summon this card from your deck by removing from play 1 "Draining Shield" from your hand, or the field. When your opponent declares an attack, you can gain Life Points equal to the attacking monster's ATK. This effect can only be used once per duel. Lore:This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned while you control a face up "Critias Domain". You can only special summon this card from your deck by removing from play 1 "Mirror Force" from your side of the field, or your hand. When this card battles an opponent's monster with more ATK, destroy all face-up monsters your opponent controls before the Damage Step. You can only use this effect once per duel. Lore:This card can only be Summoned while you control a face up "Critias Domain". You can Special Summon this card from your deck by removing from play 1 "Sakuretsu Armor" from your hand, or the field. When this card is designated as an attack target, destroy the attacking monster. This effect can only be used once per duel. Lore:This card can only be Summoned while you control a face up "Critias Domain". You can Special Summon this card from your deck by removing from play 1 "Tyrant Wing" from your hand, or the field. This card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each. Hermos: Lore:This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by having three Hermos cards in your graveyard, and by paying 4000 Life Points. As long as this card is face up on the field, its name is treated as "Hermos Armory". Once per turn, you can add one Monster Card from your deck to your hand. If you do, the selected monster cannot attack this turn. Lore:If this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard while you control 2 or more monsters, destroy all monsters on the field. Then, inflict damage to each player equal to the total ATK of their monsters that were destroyed this way. Lore:Activate from your hand or deck only when you control a "Hermos Armory", by sending 1 "Big Bang Blow" you control to the Graveyard. During either player's turn, you can Tribute a Dragon-Type monster you control and take damage equal to half the tributed monster's ATK to destroy all monsters your opponent controls and inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the combined ATK of those monsters. If you activate this effect, you cannot conduct your battle phase this turn. This effect can only be used once per duel. Lore:Activate only when you control a " Hermos Armory" by sending 1 "Queen's Knight" you control to the Graveyard. a A monster equipped with this card gains one fourth of its original ATK, rounded down to the nearest hundred. You take no Battle Damage from battles involving the equipped monster. If the equipped monster destroys an opponent's monster by battle, it can attack once again in a row. This effect can only be used once per duel. Lore:The Activation of this card cannot be negated. This card cannot be destroyed except by the effect of a spell card. Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to add one monster card from your deck to your hand. If you do, that monster cannot attack or use its effect(s) this turn, and it is sent to the graveyard during the end phase. Send the selected monster to the graveyard during the end phase. Lore:Activate from your hand or deck only when you control a " Hermos Armory", by sending 1 "Red-Eyes B. Dragon" from your side of the field to the Graveyard. A monster equipped with this card gains 1000 ATK, and an additional 500 ATK for each Dragon-Type monster on the field. Lore:Activate only from your Hand or Deck when you control a "Hermos Armory" by sending Rocket Warrior from your Field to the Graveyard. Once per turn, you can destroy all monsters your opponent controls and inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the total ATK of the destroyed monster(s). If you activate this effect, you cannot conduct your battle phase this turn. This effect can only be used once per duel. Lore:Activate from your hand or deck only when you control a "Hermos Armory" by sending 1 "Time Wizard" you control from the field to the Graveyard. When you activate this card, roll a six-sided die, then remove from play one card your opponent controls (face-down cards are removed face-down). Return the card removed by this card's effect, when the die results correspond with the number of your opponent's Standby Phases that have passed since this card's activation, to the opponent's side of the field in the same position it was i when it was removed (face-down cards are returned face-down). This effect can only be used once per duel. Timeus: Lore:This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play two Timeus cards in your graveyard, and by paying 4000 Life Points. As long as this card is face up on the field, its name is treated as "Timeus Library". Once per turn, you can Special summon one "Timeus Token" (Dragon/Light/Level 2/ ATK 1000/ DEF 1000) to your side of the field. Lore:The Activation of this card cannot be negated. This card cannot be destroyed except by a monster effect. Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon one "Timeus Token" (Dragon/Light/Level 2/ ATK 1000/ DEF 1000) to your side of the field. the Token can not be used as a tribute, or synchro material. If you special summon a token in this way, send it to the graveyard during the end phase. Lore:Timeus Token + Dark Magician This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by sending the above cards you control to the graveyard (You do not use "Polymerization"). This card gains 300 ATK for each Spell Card in your Graveyard. Lore:Timeus Token + Dark Magician GirlThis card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by sending the above cards you control to the graveyard (You do not use "Polymerization"). If this card battles with your opponent's monster, you can send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard to destroy that monster at the start of the Damage Step (without damage calculation). Lore:Timeus Token + Fog KingThis card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by sending the above cards you control to the graveyard (You do not use "Polymerization"). AS long as this card remains face up on the field, your opponent cannot tribute. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the combined level of all level 5 or higher monsters in your opponent's graveyard, and on the field, excluding this card X 200. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANZAI!!!! Posted July 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dood Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 pretty awesome cards. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dementuo Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 Good cards though a little different from the dragons that I remember... Meh. 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mentor-of-spells Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 AMAZING! 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANZAI!!!! Posted July 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 Thank you for the ratings! Hermos is next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Coaster Guy Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 post the effect under the card, ocg needs to improve, I can't read effects, but Don't use card names with other card names like mirror force dragon, it's not creative. but for very hard work and effort and how good some of them are, you get a 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANZAI!!!! Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 most were featured in the anime, so the names aren't mine.... Thanks for the rate and i'll post the lores. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilfusion Posted August 4, 2010 Report Share Posted August 4, 2010 As requested. Legendary Dragon Critias- Too easy to summon. Having a field spell and paying LP for a 4000 ATK monster that can search traps from your deck is OPed to hell. Even though you pay 4000, any deck employing LP gain can easily bring this out. Searching Traps from your deck each turn can make you nearly invincible. Blue-Eyes Tyrant Dragon- This card didn't load all the way, so I can't tell its effect. Presumably the Synchro Material is Tyrant Burst Dragon and Blue Eyes. Critias Domain- Inability of its activation to be negated is so pointless I'll overlook it. You don't need to state playing a new field spell will destroy it, because that's an inherent rule of the game. Only cards stating new fields can't be played (Field Barrier) negates that destruction method. Paying 500 to add a Trap sounds OPed, but then you state the card is sent to the grave at the end of the turn. Does that mean even setting it will get it sent? In that case, it seems to be Critias fodder, which I guess is okay. Doom Virus Dragon- holds true to the anime incarnation, although the anime used Crush Card Virus, although the change to Deck Devastation Virus is fitting due to Crush being banned. I think you should make other Virus Dragons and get rid of this one. Anime cards that are used entirely differently is senseless and uncreative. Draining Barrier Dragon- interesting, nothing really wrong with it. Mirror Force Dragon- Hmm...this one's tricky, since it's somewhat true to the anime incarnation, except its effect trigger was different due to the entire "rules don't make sense" aspect of the Duel with Dartz. I think drop the Burn aspect of its effect. Sakuretsu Armor Dragon- It's okay. Uncreative effect, but not OPed. Tyrant Burst Dragon- Meh. 1500 level 2 Tuner, likely the Material for the Synchro. At least it somewhat fits with Kaiba's move in the anime of "double fusing" Critias with a trap and then a monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANZAI!!!! Posted August 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2010 Hermos is up (other than a few custom ones). Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANZAI!!!! Posted August 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2010 Some of the timeus stuff is up. Maybe a couple more cards on the way, but the set is mostly finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANZAI!!!! Posted August 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2010 Working on posting lores now. should be done soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilfusion Posted August 9, 2010 Report Share Posted August 9, 2010 Most of them seem okay. A bit OPed, but not so ridiculous as it might look. I'll have to recheck my judgment if I ever see them in action. I kind of like Timaeus token thing. -Doom Virus Dragon is a Tuner? -I don't like Big Bang Dragon Blow's effect. It doesn't seem to have anything to do with being an equip card. Also, you should add something about not being able to do your Battle Phase that turn, otherwise it's OPed. And it shouldn't be able to use its effect during the opponent's turn. -Same thing with Rocket Hermos Cannon. It suggests you can still attack, and considering it's an Equip card, that means there's a monster on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuri Posted August 17, 2010 Report Share Posted August 17, 2010 images need work..OCG seems ok...but fix those images i believe 1 is from Digimon O.o effort and time gets you extra 7.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Resistance- Posted August 17, 2010 Report Share Posted August 17, 2010 I dont think you should post them here since they're real cards and dragons Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dahpretzel1 Posted August 17, 2010 Report Share Posted August 17, 2010 Nice cards but im not going to rate them individualy since theres so many. Overall set rating 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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