kortess Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 [center][url=http://yugioh-card-creator.fr/les_cartes/real_card/Mahad-le-Magicien-Sombre_small.png][img]http://yugioh-card-creator.fr/les_cartes/real_card/Mahad-le-Magicien-Sombre_small.png[/img][/url] [url=http://yugioh-card-creator.fr/les_cartes/real_card/Mahad-le-Magicien-Sombre_great.png][img]http://www.finalyugi.com/images/divers/zoom.gif[/img]Cliquez pour Agrandir[/url] [url=http://yugioh-card-creator.fr/les_cartes/real_card/Mahad-the-Dark-Magician_small.png][img]http://yugioh-card-creator.fr/les_cartes/real_card/Mahad-the-Dark-Magician_small.png[/img][/url] [url=http://yugioh-card-creator.fr/les_cartes/real_card/Mahad-the-Dark-Magician_great.png][img]http://www.finalyugi.com/images/divers/zoom.gif[/img]Click to Enlarge[/url] Yugioh! Card Maker Version: [img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/4076/198867.jpg[/img] [img]http://yugioh-card-creator.fr/images/warning.gif[/img][color=#FF0000][i][b]It is forbidden to copy the elements of these cards[/b][/i][/color][img]http://yugioh-card-creator.fr/images/warning.gif[/img] [color=#9400D3]Hello, I'm Kortess I'm French, I am not good in English, the text of this card is correct? [b][i]"Mahad is the ancestor of the Dark Magician as well as the faithful servant of a powerful Pharaoh Atem appointed." [/i][/b] Look my others cards in my web site[/color]:[url=http://yugioh-card-creator.fr/les_cartes/real_card/index.php]Yu-Gi-Oh! Card Creator[/url] [hr][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 same as the original Dark Magician, maybe you should change this to an Effect Monster and add some effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kortess Posted March 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 this is not exactly the same dark magician, look: [img]http://yugiohdealer.webs.com/photos/Cards-and-Sets/Dark%20Magician.jpg[/img] Mahad is the Dark Magician, so it is not necessary to modify its ATK or DEF, and it is not necessary to put an effect, I think:) or we could maybe put a gender effect: This card is treated like a Dark Magician Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGenuine Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1300073217' post='5072700'] same as the original Dark Magician, maybe you should change this to an Effect Monster and add some effects [/quote] Yes..Its excaly other then a small new twist at least mix Attack and deffence points Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 i just the pics different? boring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kortess Posted March 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 is not so bad ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8thegr8 Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 Definitely make it an effect monster that maybe can be summoned by tributing dark magician cuz he is the ancestor? Idk. Something else too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGenuine Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 Ya but its a rip off t a Epic Orginal Card Picture is very Close alike and attack is same and really Yellow Cards aren't good unless they have a good story and this one is a decently close to Dark Magician..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kortess Posted March 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 yes, it's like a new version of Dark Magician, but with the real man who gave birth to the Dark Magician, I have not much idea for the text of the card, you have a suggestion? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGenuine Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 No like the Story, but i like action kind of thing tellin about his life Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kortess Posted March 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 like: he sacrificed himself to save the life of Pharaoh, and to become his servant for ever, it merged with a magician's illusion. ?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 Stop bashing on him - it's not a bad card (though it's simple), but for a new member it's not bad. For vanillas we judge on a couple of things: • Picture • Balance • Description It may be the Dark Magician, but it's based on the anime, where Mahad, one of the 6 Priests (and original wielder of the Millenium Ring), sealed his soul into his monster, the Magus of Illusion, which evolved to become the Dark Magician. However, I would advise you to add more to the test - a little more of a story would be nice - maybe a bit more on Mahad's history. It's a nice card, but it should be placed in "Pop Culture Cards" (since it's based on something from the anime), which is found here: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/forum/10-pop-culture-cards/ Finally, I really like the template Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGenuine Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 thats a little to much sorry Zextra I was just saying what i learned and my opinion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 Sorry - it's just that I don't want new members with potential to leave the site after his first post... It's a perfectly fine card, just maybe in the wrong section Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kortess Posted March 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 Thank U =) hum, I'm not new member ^^ (Joined: 20-January 10) >>>[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/186772-horakhty-creator-of-light/page__p__3840336__hl__kortess__fromsearch__1#entry3840336"]Horakty...[/url] You can remove this post or I have to re do it in another section? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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