supermegatron1245 Posted February 25, 2009 Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 Yah I'm new here and i made 3 transformer cards like the title says so here they are: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted February 25, 2009 Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 bad images (blurry, no BG) bag OCG(wrong use of capatalizatin and efffect) Why have you put on an effect mosnter, 'Effect:' have you seen a REAL yugioh card before? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted February 25, 2009 Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 G1 Unicron:Badly overpoweredDoes not deserve "Divine-Beast" typeBlurry pictureOCG errors all aroundToo much ATK and DEF. WAY too much. Movie Megatron:Did you have to include "Movie" in the name?Bad picture, and no backgroundEffect monsters do not have "Effect:" in their effects. The only thing close to that is a monsters "Flip:" effectFrom what I could read, the effect is cheap (and bad OCG) Unicron Tranform's:Bad name grammar. It's Transforms, not Transform'sAlong with OCG errors Overall cards: Give picture credit They are badly made, but the idea is original. 2/10. Very poor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supermegatron1245 Posted February 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 These were my first cards and the reason i call them different name's like movie and G1 is because i intend to make all of there different incarnations so here are there improved versionEdit : I got the images from google so sorry if you get made if i used images and if you ask i will get rid of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted February 26, 2009 Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 It shouldn't be "Movie Megatron". I know you want to differenciate, but make his name something long and flowing, like, "Megatron, Decepticon Menace" or something.P.S. if you are having trouble with ritual cards, look some real ones up on google and follow their example Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted February 26, 2009 Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 OCG is bad. The pics are bad and need backgrounds. Effects are boring. Needs work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supermegatron1245 Posted February 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 Well here is my better G1 Unicron cardHere is my new Unicron Transforms cardFinally here is the better Megatron cardSo keep commenting so i can make better cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rodri666 Posted February 26, 2009 Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 Your new cards looks fine but you still have some errors:machine card=Machine-Type monstersummon=Summon (in Megatron)My rate: 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supermegatron1245 Posted February 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 Here's Megatron card and i think i finally got it right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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