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OCG= Official Card Grammar.

And your first card has bad OCG. It should be like:

This card can only be activated when one of your opponent's monsters battles 1 monster on your side of the field with "boxer" in its name. Both of the monster's ATK become the same as the attacked card.

(It's not great, but the OCG looks a lot like a real effect)

As for the monster:

Do not make Normal monsters. They are frowned upon here, simply because without effects, they are useless. So FYI, make it an effect monster

And warrior= Warrior

 

5/10. Read what i've said, and take it into account. But not bad!

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OCG= Official Card Grammar.

And your first card has bad OCG. It should be like:

This card can only be activated when one of your opponent's monsters battles 1 monster on your side of the field with "boxer" in its name. Both of the monster's ATK become the same as the attacked card.

(It's not great' date=' but the OCG looks a lot like a real effect)

As for the monster:

Do not make Normal monsters. They are frowned upon here, simply because without effects, they are useless. So FYI, make it an effect monster

And warrior= Warrior

 

5/10. Read what i've said, and take it into account. But not bad!

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ok thanks i put that effect in the card if you don't mean and the monster is a quick demonstration of what monster i will make

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