a new set

[Nitemare452]

well i posted three of these up on a earlier post, this was going to be based around a normal set but i changed it so here they are and maybe more to come...I never really think that far ahead.lol.

 

[Dream]

The slaghter has exactly the same effect as torriential...

[World Eater Gig]

No, its not the same effect as torrential. 'The Slaughter' says ALL cards on the field. That would include Spell and Trap cards as well.

Not too bad. Some minor OCG errors (mainly capitalization, like Summoned, not summoned), but it looks fairly good.

[Nitemare452]

Not too bad. Some minor OCG errors (mainly capitalization' date=' like Summoned, not summoned), but it looks fairly good.

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which ones have the OCG on them?

[World Eater Gig]

Types of Summons (Normal Summon, Tribute Summon, etc) should be capitalized. That's prevalent on all of your cards. Graveyard and Deck should also be capitalized, but I'm not sure about hand. When referring to a Card, call it 'this Monster' or 'this Spell' (remember, Card types are capitalized), instead of 'this Card' (Card is capitalized too).

When designating a flip effect, put 'FLIP' in capitals.

Also, remember to use commas. ('When this Monster is Summoned,' or 'When this Monster is destroyed by battle,)

From memory, there was a tutorial stickied around here about Card OCG. Just can't remember where.

Finally, you may want to reword 'Eye of judgement'. It's a little confusing.

Hope it helps.

[rodri666]

Nice cards. I like some pics. Some small OCG errors in all cards. 7/10