Wuu. Posted February 26, 2009 Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 [align=center] http://bloodmarionette.deviantart.com/art/Uhh-Ninja-Protoss-24887349 This is my first attempt at an effect that can destroy Tokens, please correct all the mistakes made. Whenever your opponent places a Token on the field while this card is the only monster on your side of the field you can destroy that token, when this card is destroyed by battle your opponent must remove all Tokens from the field.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted February 26, 2009 Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 its nice....... but the wording could need some work......8.10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted February 26, 2009 Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 6/10. You are supposed to stop for sentences. Whenever should be When. Other errors as well, but OK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted February 26, 2009 Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 Oh no, a Token killer that's come to save me from the dreaded Sheep Tokens, Kaien Token, Lamb Tokens, Ojama Tokens, Ant Tokens, and Option Tokens!!! Really unnecessary, and the theme is so "rogue" that I'd never consider him. 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonRoyale Posted February 26, 2009 Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 "Whenever your opponent Special Summons a Token(s), destroy the Token(s). When this card is destroyed, destroy all Tokens on the field." A bit...weak, no offense. 7.2/10, just because it's going to be overlooked. Low ATK, and a bit of a weak effect (I only see this countering Goats at best :S) for a Tribute monster. Perhaps rework its ATK and level? :S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted February 26, 2009 Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 Needs rewording and with 2000 ATK it's not too useful, especially if aimed as a token destroyer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted February 26, 2009 Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 "While this card is face-up on the field, neither player can Special Summon Tokens." Done. >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonRoyale Posted February 26, 2009 Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 ...I suppose that works just as well >_ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted February 26, 2009 Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 I was hoping by the title that it would be Jinzo related. =/ Whenever your opponent places a Token on the field while this is the only monster you control, you can destroy the token. When this card is destroyed by battle, your opponent must remove all Tokens from the field. Meh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted February 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 Ok, everyone agrees with me that this is like the worst card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted February 26, 2009 Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 Ok' date=' everyone agrees with me that this is like the worst card?[/quote'] I wouldn't say worst card, but yeah it is pretty bad. Unless there is some sort of a Trap that does something when Tokens are destroyed, this card results in a dead draw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted February 26, 2009 Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 it can be useful if tokens see constant play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonRoyale Posted February 26, 2009 Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 It would be much more useful if Tokens were more popular and you saw something other than Scapegoat in constant rotation in decks. Plus, it requires a tribute, and has pathetic ATK for a tribute monster. Just rework its level or ATK and it'll be MUCH better. Not cookie-cutter worthy, but better than it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted February 26, 2009 Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 Give it 1800 ATK and make it a 4 star. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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