alpha1234 Posted February 27, 2009 Report Share Posted February 27, 2009 these are my first cards now updatedplease rate /10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted February 27, 2009 Report Share Posted February 27, 2009 ocg is terrible.. really to many mistakes to name.. things like capitalization of 1st word of a sentence, card name,card type... please no vanillas... bad effects not worded properly, 1 of your cards has no pic, 1 thing good some of your pics are good... really not the best effort, but try again... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alpha1234 Posted February 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2009 thanks for the input and the card without the pic is supposed to be a mirror and as for OCG i did my best i am also from the ukraine so gimme a break Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted February 27, 2009 Report Share Posted February 27, 2009 Yea ok sorry, but its the capitalization you have missed the most.. I could give u a few tips on ocg if you'd like.. Or you could check out dj. osirus's ocg thread.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maali Posted February 27, 2009 Report Share Posted February 27, 2009 good cards man try to do more :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alpha1234 Posted February 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2009 i am trying to create cards can anyone help me with the OCG a little more just pm me with hints on how to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted February 27, 2009 Report Share Posted February 27, 2009 OCG needs work. Doesn't anyone realize you need to capitalize effects correctly?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon_22 Posted February 27, 2009 Report Share Posted February 27, 2009 Agree with *ARCEUS* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Keeper Posted February 27, 2009 Report Share Posted February 27, 2009 There are 5 Normal monsters and 5 effect monsters, but there are not Spell ofr Trap Cards? PLEASE NOT MAKE DIVINE-BEAST, dragon = Dragon, spellcaster = Spellcaster and warrior = Warrior. The effect of "god of all dragons" is overpowered and:(Card Text)this card can only special summoned by tributing 2 dragons and removing them from the play, this card gains 300 atk points for every dragon in your graveyard(Correctly)This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 2 Dragon-type monster (from your side of the field or Graveyard?) and removing them from the play. Increase the ATK of this card by 300 points for each/every Dragon type monster on your Graveyard.Make no vanillas. 5/10 because you are a new member. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alpha1234 Posted February 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2009 i am gonna create an entire new set using dragons, effect,ritual,fusion,syncro,spells,traps hope you will like when i upload tomorow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Keeper Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 I forgot it... 3.5 Stars, Do you want 4 Stars? Because the set is ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 There are 5 Normal monsters and 5 effect monsters' date=' but there are not Spell ofr Trap Cards? PLEASE NOT MAKE DIVINE-BEAST, dragon = Dragon, spellcaster = Spellcaster and warrior = Warrior. The effect of "god of all dragons" is overpowered and:(Card Text)this card can only special summoned by tributing 2 dragons and removing them from the play, this card gains 300 atk points for every dragon in your graveyard(Correctly)This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 2 Dragon-type monster (from your side of the field or Graveyard?) and removing them from the play. Increase the ATK of this card by 300 points for each/every Dragon type monster on your Graveyard.Make no vanillas. 5/10 because you are a new member.[/quote'] Sorry to correct you soul keeper but you're ocg correction isn't right.. Here is what you should have wrote.. You could have meant effect in 2 ways This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 2 Dragon-Type monsters in your Graveyard. This card gains 300 ATK for every Dragon-Type monster in the Graveyard. or This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 2 Dragon-Type monsters you control. This card gains 300 ATK for every Dragon-Type monster in the Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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