al9090 Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 please rate them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 They look interesting but there are some obvious errors. For one every time you used "may" in the effects you should be using can. On "Warrior of Fear-Gaurdian" no monster is deserving of 4000 ATK and in additon to high ATK be immune to Spell Cards. Also his effect should say "By paying half of your Lifepoints you can special summon this card from your Graveyard". For "Warrior of Fear-Dark Master" he is overpowered. In a fiend deck his ATK can easily get about 3500. Also, there should be a little more to his effect. It just seems like there wasn't much effort put into it. For "Warrior of Fear-Fallen Angel" it is a bit overpowered as well. Others will tell you that no monster should have over 3000 ATK, I really don't have an issue with 3300. Also the effect should say, "Everytime a Spell Card is activated increase your Lifepoints by 500. This card cannot attack your opponent's Lifepoints directly."Good job overall, just work on them a bit and they will live up to their names, for now you get a 6.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohman14 Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 alright but a little overpowered and first pic is overused Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eternal Duelist Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 D: those are bad cards (I'm sorry but its true) you should go herehttp://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Main_Pageand look up cards that have similar effects and try to imitate their grammar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlickimenT Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 lack of puncuation, spelling and OCGfirst pic is pretty much in EVERY CARD3.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iSTIX Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 OCG problems everywhere:(, wrong spellings:(, I'm sorry but these cards are bad:( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Your older ones were better. Sorry bro. 6.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeREVOLUTION Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 ocg=bad 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duplicitous Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Keep going 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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