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Marly

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Smudging is bad, on the right it's not necessary and was done in a bulbous liquid manner which does not go with the render at all and on the left the part from the render looks like a large mush, blending like that should be more smooth and less clustered

Lighting seems like it might be wrong, from what I can see on the render it looks like it comes from a higher position on the right rather than the entire right side.

Render is really lq compared to the background and does not work with it

The little bulbs on the right don't really work out since they don't seem as plausible bubbles to block light.

No depth or flow

Blending is bad

Text is bad, if you can't do text then just don't put it and if a side seems empty then put an effect or something.

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