Marly Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 I know the text is pretty bad, but without it the right side would be a bit boring compared to the left. Eh. Anyway, CnC pl0x. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 Smudging is bad, on the right it's not necessary and was done in a bulbous liquid manner which does not go with the render at all and on the left the part from the render looks like a large mush, blending like that should be more smooth and less clusteredLighting seems like it might be wrong, from what I can see on the render it looks like it comes from a higher position on the right rather than the entire right side.Render is really lq compared to the background and does not work with itThe little bulbs on the right don't really work out since they don't seem as plausible bubbles to block light.No depth or flowBlending is badText is bad, if you can't do text then just don't put it and if a side seems empty then put an effect or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.