火 Neiller 火 Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 here is 3 cards of mine XD and BEFORE YOUR LOOK AT THE CARDS I know that there is words and a border in the pics they're suppose to be like that XD[spoiler=Cards][spoiler=Neirureru][spoiler=Deragonu][spoiler=Rabrage] image credit for all 3: went to a section at the following site did the steps provided and it gave me the pics at the end XD http://moria.lotro.com/index_fs.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitemare452 Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 The cards can use some re-wording, exp. "This card can only be used to equip a Warrior-Type" sounds better as This card can only be equipped to a Warrior-Type. The pictures are cool and i do like what you are hitting at with the effects so 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
火 Neiller 火 Posted February 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 The cards can use some re-wording' date=' exp. "This card can only be used to equip a Warrior-Type" sounds better as This card can only be equipped to a Warrior-Type. The pictures are cool and i do like what you are hitting at with the effects so 7/10[/quote']The way i worded the cards is how other multiply REAL cards have been worded i double checked be before posting them XD so my ocg is 100% correct XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 Several OCG errors. Mind if I fix your first card's effect:This card can only be equipped to a Warrior-Type monster. Increase the equipped monster's ATK and DEF by 500 points. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 Equip Spell Card on the field. Changes:monsters= monsterIncreases= IncreaseField= field Also, these cards are a bit too cheap. Where's the drawback? Anyway, 6/10, since the overall OCG is OK, but the pictures show too much words and does not focus on the weapon itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitemare452 Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 The cards can use some re-wording' date=' exp. "This card can only be used to equip a Warrior-Type" sounds better as This card can only be equipped to a Warrior-Type. The pictures are cool and i do like what you are hitting at with the effects so 7/10[/quote']The way i worded the cards is how other multiply REAL cards have been worded i double checked be before posting them XD so my ocg is 100% correct XD They did at one point but that was when they first came out, now they have changed it so it is a OCG error Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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