freakazoid Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 One of the first three cards from me, enjoy and post comments! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 When this card is Summoned on your side of the field = when this card is Summoned. [unless you're trying to say that it's not suppost to be Summoned on your opponent's side of the field. (Or not able).] isn't = are noso it should be "While there are no other". Oh, and thats pretty damn good OCG for a new member. Just thoose slight errors.Also, remember not to write Kazuki Takahashi. Because writing Kazuki Takahashi os a bit too "realistic". XDAlso, cards that are LIMITED EDITION need to have a gold sticker.6.4/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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