Electron Vortex Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 Here's the card... [spoiler=Effect]This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sacrificing 2 Dragon-Type monsters and 1 Warrior-Type monster. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, you opponent must discard a card from his/her hand and pay 200 Life points to activate a Spell or Trap card from his/her hand. Hope you like! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A●O●J Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 Your OCG needs alot of work, but its not horrible. can not=cannotsacrifice=Tributewhenever=when FIXED:As long as this card remains face-up on the field, you opponent must discard a card from his/her hand and pay 200 Life points to activate a Spell or Trap card from his/her hand.(Its pretty accurate, but it might be wrong) The card is underpowered. Having to tribute a warrior and 2 dragons for a Level 8 is just annoying and pointless and its effect doesn't really make up for its very high Summoning cost. I guess you could increase the LP paying to 600 or something, but its really hard to fix this card without having to totally redo it. It also doesn't look like a Dragon or have anything to do with Dragons. Same thing with E-heros. Dragon Type E-Heros would like fairly stupid. Overall4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Electron Vortex Posted February 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 Thanks for the advice. I'll fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 Yeah, but your OCG isn't that horrid.Epic pic 6.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Electron Vortex Posted February 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 Pic Credit to Father Wolf. Forgot to mention that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LostLetter227 Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 Love the pic. It's very underpowered because of the high tribute cost and a huge flaw in the effect. I would change it's second effect to: "As long as this card remains face-up on the field, you opponent must discard a card from his/her hand and pay 200 Life points to activate a Spell or Trap card from his/her hand."If one wants to activate a spell card, why not just set it since the effect says "from the hand"? and Trap Cards can't be activated from the hand anyway. Extremely good OCG except the word "Sacrifice". I guess you watch the Anime alot huh? Like Metal Snake said, the correct word is "Tribute" in today's game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Electron Vortex Posted February 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 Love the pic. It's very underpowered because of the high tribute cost and a huge flaw in the effect. I would change it's second effect to: "As long as this card remains face-up on the field' date=' you opponent must discard a card from his/her hand and pay 200 Life points to activate a Spell or Trap card [s']from his/her hand.[/s]"If one wants to activate a spell card, why not just set it since the effect says "from the hand"? and Trap Cards can't be activated from the hand anyway. Extremely good OCG except the word "Sacrifice". I guess you watch the Anime alot huh? Like Metal Snake said, the correct word is "Tribute" in today's game. Oh. Because I thought... Oh what the hell... Thanks for telling. =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jxmaster Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 Not horrible, but the "opponent must discard a card from his/her hand and pay 200 Life points to activate a Spell or Trap card from his/her hand." needs fixing. Traps can't be played from the hand, and Spells can't be played from the hand, unless it's a Quick-Play card. Though, the pic looks cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.arx Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 You suck ass... No.. Im just kidding.. Needs some work on OCg but otherwise, fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
halatravaler Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 ok MICHAEL54345 if any one tells you that this card sucks or is not good. eknore them this is one of the beast cards i have ever seen i makes some of my cards look like a 1000 eyes idol. 999/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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