DiGGDaGG Posted March 4, 2009 Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 [align=center]Long time no card ;) I'll give a try with these two. --- Windurion, Sky Warrior ---[spoiler=Card preview:] [spoiler=Card effect:]---As long as this card remains face-up on the field, players can draw 2 cards instead of 1 during their Draw Phase.--- [spoiler=Image credit:]Michael Waters @ Fantasy Art Gifts --- Hautius, Dark Revealer ---[spoiler=Card preview:] [spoiler=Card effect:]---This card cannot be Set. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, Monster Cards cannot be Set. This card gains 150 ATK for every DARK monster in your Graveyard.--- [spoiler=Image credit:]Michael Waters @ Fantasy Art Gifts [/align] Explain your ratings and my errors - then i will know what I'm doing wrong! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted March 4, 2009 Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 "As long as this card remains face-up on the field, players can draw 2 cards instead of 1 during their Draw Phase. When this card is destroyed by your opponent's Effect Monster's effect, you can discard 1 Spell Card from your hand to increase your Life Points by 500." * FIXED *the last effect is useless, remove it. -------------------- "This card cannot be Set. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, Monster Cards cannot be Set. This card gains 150 ATK for each DARK monster in your Graveyard, and loses 100 ATK for each LIGHT monster in your Graveyard" * FIXED *also, remove the last effect good cards anyways,after u fix your OCG, I'll give them a 8.5/10keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DiGGDaGG Posted March 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 Thanks DeViLQ8, edited.Hope they are worthy now... But still - need comments and judgement ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted March 4, 2009 Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 The "increase the ATK of this card by 150 for each DARK ..." was a good one,I meant by the last effect, the one that decreases its ATK. anyways as I said above, nice cards.but you need to be more creative in your future cards ^_^ good luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DiGGDaGG Posted March 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 LMAO!I thought entire last part...Will re-edit in the evening ;) PS! I like it simple - don't like huge and complicated effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dead draw Posted March 4, 2009 Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 awesome cards. I'd recommend giving Windurion an effect like Gorz the Emissary of Darkness, where you can special summon it towards the end of your opponents turn after taking battle damage and be the first to benefit from his effect. that would make him perfect. but it's your card, so do as you will1st card: 9/102nd card: 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DiGGDaGG Posted March 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2009 Thanks for your opinion! Anyone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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