NeriesUmbra Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 I just came up with these a second ago and i think there cool at least ples tell me what you think. IMG cred to deviant ARTSo are they cool or what 8)This took me ages to do can someone pleas rate it good or bad i don't care i just want to know wether i did good or notThis took me ages to do can someone pleas rate it good or bad i don't care i just want to know wether i did good or notThis took me ages to do can someone pleas rate it good or bad i don't care i just want to know wether i did good or not Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 I like them but there are some issues. For lvl 4 end fase should be End Phase. These are overpowered as you can summon the lvl 8 on the same turn as the lvl 1. Other than that I like them, 7/10, you might want to try and build a set around this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 It works with both of the decks im inventing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 someone pleas rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 The Last Pic isnt as good as the rest, but they flow well together. Also there are capitalization errors, graveyard, special summon, summon, flip summon, tribute summon, deck, and i think level should all be Capitalized Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 oh i'm on it apart from the pic that is.Can eneyone else see eneything rong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 One more thing, Monsters Is NOT Capital :D Great Last Pic btw8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Thank you:DThere i'v chaged them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rizikin Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Overpowered, 2nd pic stretched. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 oops XD opponent isnt capital as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 k thank you againThere changed again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Heh, I like 'em. :]9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MICHAEL BISBAL MARTY Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 thuse r nice card woeld love to have them in my deck(\__/)(='.'=)This is Bunny. Copy and paste him into your sig(")_(")to help him gain world domination. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 oh, dont spell out 1 just put numbers dont spell them out, and make sure everything is spelled right, (There is a spelling check) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 there done so is there eneything els rong with this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kefka~ Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 the images have a nice flow to them and they match up well, i see little to no OCG error 9.7/10 very well done, but i think you need image cred. if it's up there already sry, i don't see it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 so what problems did you see if eneycan eneyone spot the problem this person did Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 You spelled phase "fase" its PHASE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magnific0H Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 I think the last pic is excellent and the second, not too sure about the egg though.Great job :)A few spelling mistakes9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 what words are spelt rong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
god_duel Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 nice card except spelling 7/10 to go to you :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 Is the spelling right now or did I miss something if so what did I miss Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keyblade Spirit Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 This is just my opinion. You should change it to Phoenix Angel, instead Fire Angel.Although it's weird. I came up with a similar Normal Monster. The description was:A mysterious woman who emerged from a phoenix egg. She has been searching for a purpose ever since. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeroukoo Posted March 29, 2009 Report Share Posted March 29, 2009 Good cards8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
malp98 Posted March 31, 2009 Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 I think the cards are good but you should change the LV1 fire angel's pic. Also you should add a LV6 Fire angel that'll be awesome 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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