~Shore Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 a card I maed for a contest with Death Bishop This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by destroying and removing from play 4 Level 3 or lower monsters you control. When this card is Special Summoned, you can also Special Summon 1 Guardian Orc from your Deck. When you control another monster when you control this card, this card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is destroyed by battle, you must send 2 monsters from your Deck or hand to the Graveyard.image credit: http://i381.photobucket.com/albums/oo257/whoosa_08/warlord.jpgand because you guys askedimage credit: http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd178/prettyboylucas/orc.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 Well it seems fine, but you need to reword part of the effect. I shall post fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 I like it...I like it alot. Creative effect, amusing pic. I wanna see Guardian Orc, though. 9/10, maybe higher if you can show me the Orc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted March 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 Well it seems fine' date=' but you need to reword part of the effect. I shall post fix.[/quote']please do. thnx :DI like it...I like it alot. Creative effect' date=' amusing pic. I wanna see Guardian Orc, though. 9/10, maybe higher if you can show me the Orc.[/quote']thank you :Dthe orc was inspired by the creature at the bottom of the pic, and since when I write the effect I consider the pic, I wrote that in as a strength for the card seeing as the creature in the pic needed explaining. So if you could find a pic that looks kinda like that I would definitely make the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 Meh... Unable to judge/critique until I see Guardian Orc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 -no need for "also", just say you can Special Summon. -put Guardian Orc between " " -When you control another monster when you control this card = when you control monster(s) other than this card - Since u write you MUST, then you must mention what happens if you cannot send 2 monsters from your hand or deck to the graveyard, (no monsters in your deck/hand left) also as I said before, the last 2 effects are useless, no way someone will destroy this card by battle while there are plenty of card effects that can do the job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 thnx for fixes. I may add them if I has time I added Guardian Orc since so many people asked for it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
al9090 Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 OMG good cards 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 ^plz don't do that, its considered spam moar comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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