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Return To The Land Of Pikmin (Chapter 3 UP! GETTING MYSTERIOUS!)

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Since all of My Fics Failed ima Trying This one. May not have Character List Because of the almost Impossible Pic Finding.

 

[spoiler=Chapters]

[spoiler=Prologue]

"Today is The 30th Anniversary of the Discovery of Pikmin, The Unnamed Planet and Olimar's Crash Landing. He Is Also known as Grandpa Oli to some, Retired Captain Olimar is a hero to the residents of Hocotate. Olimar Crash landed on an Unnamed Planet dubbed "The Land Of Pikmin" and met these creatures. They helped him escape and get home safely. 1 year later he traveled with his Partner Louie and together they succesfully payed off the company's Debt. On the Way Back Louie Fell out of the ship! Olimar and his boss both came back and saved Louie. 7 years later Oli's Son, Billy went back and discovered 2 new species. These Pikmin have been very interesting and only 1 family owns 1 of each type and 1 Bulborb, The Hocolat Family. Olimar allowed it and now he is pround. His Grandson, Ryan Hocolat, is his Pride and joy. As many state he is a Pikmin lover. Olimar has puplished his Notes while on the Planet. It's Named "The Piktionary". The 7 Recorded Species are The Red Pikmin, Yellow Pikmin, Blue Pikmin, White Pikmin, Purple Pikmin, Green Pikmin and The Pink Pikmin. Each Pikmin has a Leaf on it's head. Once the Leaf becomes a bud, the Pikmin starts maturing and getting stronger. They then grow a Flower, Proving Maturity. Each Pikmin has a distinct feature. The Red one has a nose. The Yellow one has big ears so it can glide with the wind. The Blue one has mouth-like gills so it can breath under water. The White one has two Big Red eyes so it can sense underground items. It also has natural Poison in it's body. The Purple one has little hairs on it's head. The Green one is a Parasite and The Pink one has Wings so it can catch arial prey. We will Now Speak to Olimar and air. a Documentary of Pikmin Right After this."

 

The T.V. clicked off as Ryan got up. He was about to go to his mom when he heard a key twist in the Kitchen. The Only Cabinent with a Keyhole is The one that nobody should open. He then heard the Cabinent drawer being pulled.

 

"Mom...What are you doing....." He said as he got closer to the room.

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter One: Dwaggy, Pikmin and Alyssa Oh My!]

Ryan saw his mom pull out a package of Blue Tickets. She took five and put the rest in the drawer. She then saw Ryan.

 

“You’re wondering what these are aren’t you.” She asked, smiling.

 

Ryan just nodded. He was bored to death and wanted something to do, and this was his chance.

 

“They’re Tickets to a Special VIP space tour.” She said with a grin

 

“Why five tickets? And What Ship are we using! Who’s Driving?” Ryan had so many questions.

 

“Well, You have to take You’re sister, 2 Pikmin and Dwaggy.”

 

“I don’t mind the Pikmin and Dwaggy but Alyssa! Come on!”

 

At the sound of his name, Dwaggy, the pet Bulbmin ran to the two, nudging Ryan’s leg with his head.

 

“You have to Ryan. You’ll be taking The Dolphin and Jeremy will be driving.”

 

“The Old Guy!? He was a Great Grandpa when Oli was 12!! He’ll have a Heart Attack or something.”

 

His mom sighed. She decided that she would use force. She told Ryan to see Olimar and chat with him. Ryan walked off with Dwaggy right behind him.

 

"Sigh, Kids."

 

Just then, Alyssa came out of her room with an annoyed expression on her face.

 

"Mom! Where's My iPack!

 

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter Two: Zack]

“Alyssa, why would I touch it. I don’t know where it is.” She said in an annoyed voice. Ryan’s mom is nice but she can get annoyed easily.

 

 

“Ryan! I know you have it! Give It BACK!” Alyssa was a stubborn girl who was always annoyed. She had long black hair and a frilly pink shirt. Her pants were blue and she always looked at Ryan with Disgust.

 

“Oh my Bulblax! I DON’T HAVE IT!!! Leave me alone!”

 

Ryan ran out of the room. He left the house and ran a few blocks down. He went to a brown house with the numbers 455. He rang the doorbell and a short old man answered. He had barely any hair, a blue space suit and squinted eyes. He cheerfully looked at Ryan.

 

“Ryan! Come in Come In!” He said with a happy voice.

 

The house was bare and empty. The man took a cup of tea and sat down.

 

“So, you’re looking for Oli right?” His lip curled with the question.

 

“Yea, where is he anyway?” Ryan’s words were dry and sounded rude.

 

“If you watched the News he’s being interviewed, maybe we should watch.”

 

He then signaled a moving motion with his hand. Ryan moved and watched. The man then shouted “Zack!! Tele!” A White Pikmin came out. It gave a remote to the man and then walked out of the room. It came back with a small T.V. It’s huge red eyes just stared forward as it carried the machine. It placed it down and started to walk away. Just then something jumped on it

 

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter Three:Blue Pikmin]

It was Dwaggy. The Bulbmin started whacking Zack like he always did. Zack and Dwaggy don’t get along that much, so it was common for them to fight. The Only one who could stop them was Jeanne. Out of nowhere she came out and jumped on Dwaggy. Her Green-Blue Flower whacking them both made them stop. The Old man just laughed. He then took the Remote Control and turned the T.V. On.

 

“So Oli, As they call you, what Pikmin is your favorite?” The Lady in the box said as she stirred in her seat.

 

“Well, If I don’t say Blue Louie would get angry…” The Old Man Started to laugh.

 

“He’s Darn Right I would! Blue Pikmin Saved my life down there!” His forehead started to crinkle with that sentence.

 

“…So I guess I’ll say all of them! Besides Blue, ha, just kidding Louie! Don’t get as heart attack!”

 

“Well That’s all the time we have with Olimar! Well this is Judy Reynold from Hocotate Today saying back to you Joe!”

 

The T.V. clicked off.

 

“Well Oli should be home soon, what should we talk about. Your Tour?”

 

“How Did Yo-“

 

“Oli Tells me everything about you guys. Like how he took Alyssa’s iPack by accident.”

 

“And She blames me….”

 

A while later the doorbell rang. They went to pick it up and an Old man was there. He had no hair and wore a Red Spacesuit. When the door opened he announced.

 

“Oli’s Home!”

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Pikmin Addition List]

I need help with Pikmin Colors!

 

Color:

Attribute:

Weakness:

Ability:

Defenses:

Distinct Feature:

Where does it live (If Onion Then What Color):

 

 

 

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