Quietevil Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Please read the rules,no double Types.Sub Types are fine,and is that Bahumut from FFVII? cause if it is,then he needs to go in pop culture,or a change of pic at the very least,and please work on OCG,if I have it right it should be "Increase this card's attack by 200 for every Dragon-Type card in either player's Graveyard,this card is immune to the effects of Trap Cards,negate the effects of all Spell Cards when they are activated." that last parts a little rough,but he seems a little Oped,no cost?6/10 for now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 First off I think this should be posted in pop culture. Quite a few things, here we go. One, the pic needs a background and you need to give credit for the pic. Two, WIND is only an attribute not a type. Three, in a card's own effect you never refer to it by its name. The effect should be something like: "Increase this card's ATK by 200 for every Dragon-Type monster in either player's Graveyard. This card is unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards. Once per turn you can negate the effect of one Spell Card.", something like this, I don't have the best ocg. Fourth, a level 8 monster needs more ATK than 2400, try anywhere from 2600-3000, but not higher than 3000. The DEF is fine. Overall a good idea for a powerful king of dragons. I give you a 6/10 (you're new it's okay) fix some of the errors and I'll make it an 8/10. I hope my opinions help your card making progress. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
al9090 Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 First off I think this should be posted in pop culture. Quite a few things' date=' here we go. One, the pic needs a background and you need to give credit for the pic. Two, WIND is only an attribute not a type. Three, in a card's own effect you never refer to it by its name. The effect should be something like: "Increase this card's ATK by 200 for every Dragon-Type monster in either player's Graveyard. This card is unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards. Once per turn you can negate the effect of one Spell Card.", something like this, I don't have the best ocg. Fourth, a level 8 monster needs more ATK than 2400, try anywhere from 2600-3000, but not higher than 3000. The DEF is fine. Overall a good idea for a powerful king of dragons. I give you a 6/10 (you're new it's okay) fix some of the errors and I'll make it an 8/10. I hope my opinions help your card making progress.[/quote']yup Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quietevil Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 I've made some major changes to the card itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 The 2650 may not get very much,I suggest straight up 2700,it'll make it balanced,but the pic also needs changed,you'll be hearing that a lot.The frist sentence should go "Increase this card's ATK by 200 for every Dragon-Type monster in either player's Graveyards."And Trap card=Trap CardSpell card=Spell Cardbetter,7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
al9090 Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Dragon-TypeDestroy one Spell or Trap. This effect can only be used every 2 turns. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Correct OCG:Increase this card's ATK by 200 for each Dragon-Type monster in either player's Graveyard. Once per 2 turns, destroy 1 Spell or Trap Cards. OP'd for a Level 8 monster. 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 For Your Name Dont Use '','' It makes it a bit more sukish...... but your card is good for a newb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 For Your Name Dont Use ''' date=''' It makes it a bit more [b']suckish[/b]...... but your card is good for a n00bSerenade, your spelling mistakes (uugggghhh) have been corrected. Belongs in Pop Culture, Bahamut is from Final Fantasy 7.If you continue to call the card Bahamut, get it moved to pop culture and change the pic.Overall, VERY good card for a newbie. Add a cost to the Spell/Trap effect and make it Level 9 or 10. Improve your OCG as well.7.5/10~Alf~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Underpowered... =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 I would write it this way: Icrease the ATK of this card by the number of Dragon-Type monsters in both player's Graveyard x 200. Once per turn, you may destroy 1 Spell/Trap Card on the field. If you activate this effect, you cannot activate it during your next turn. I personally don't like it. The pic is a little blurry and could be a lot more centered. B. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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